to eat is alway alright
I really like to eat food and desert.
I think i live for eatting.
That's why i can't success diet.
Before come to china,I don't like eat vesitober.and just like to meat.
But now i really like to eat vesitover.
Now i can eat everything and expect discussting food.
Recently,many people in order to diet,just eat a little.
But i can't like that.
Because i know food dring me happy.
So if my mood is not good,I try find good food and eatting that.
But i know the hobby is jot good,so i want to change my hobby.
Like a that:if my mood is not good,just try to exercise.
Exercise also bring happy and better that before mood.
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to eat is alway alright
I really like to eat food and desSert.I think i live for eating.
That's why i can't (BE successFUL) (HAVE Success) WITH/AT A diet.
Before I cAme to China , I dIDN't like TO eat VEGETABLES, and I just likeD to EAT meat.
But now i really like to eat VEGETABLES..
Now i can eat everything exCePt disGusting food.
Recently, many people(,) in order to diet, just ATE a little.
But i can't BE like that.
Because i know food MAKES me happy/ BRINGS me happiNESS.
So if my mood is not good, I try TO find good food and TRY eating that.
But i know the hobby is Not A good ONE, so i want to change my hobby.
I DO IT Like THIS: If my mood is not good, I just try to exercise.
Exercise also bringS happINESS and IS better thaN MY EARLIER/PREVIOUS mood.
If you use Before -> all verbs in the sentence are past-tense
If you use Now -> all verbs in the sentence are present tense.
If you use Recently -> past-tense
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To Eat Right
I think I live to eat.
That is why I can't diet successfully.
Before coming to China, I didn't like eat vegetarian foods and just liked meat.
But now I really like to eat vegetarian foods.
--> Now I can eat everything and expect disgusting food. <-- Not clear.
Recently, many people in order to diet, just eat a little.
But i can't do that.
Because I know food brings me happiness.
So if my mood is not good, I try to find good food and eat it.
But I know the hobby is not good, so I want to change my hobby.
Now if my mood is not good, I just try to exercise.
Exercise also brings me happiness and betters my mood.
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