Oceans pollution
The pollution of the oceans is a big problem.
80 % of the oceans pollution are originated on land: 12 % from oils and 36 % from cities and factories. In fact, the farmers use fertilizers and a lot of them finish in the oceans, in which grows the algaes that soffocated the marine plants.
Other source of the oceans pollution are the plastic garbages, like plastic bags, which decomposly very slow. The plastic bags with the moviment of the water and window finishing in the rivers and in the oceans, where the marine animals, like sea birds, confusing them for fishing animals. Each year, a million of sea-birds died for the plastic garbages.
Finally, other source of the oceans pollution are toxic chemicals. Until 1970s chemical wastes were freely dumped into the oceans. Today is allowed by the laws, but some manufacturies and disposal sities continue to pollute the oceans with toxic chemicals. These chemical wastes are very toxic and they are ingested from the sea animals, which can finish in the sea food, in ours food chain.
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Oceans Pollution of oceans
The pollution of the oceans is a big problem.
80 % of the oceans pollution are originated on land: 12 % from oils oil refineries? and 36 % from cities and factories. In fact, the farmers use fertilizers and a lot of them wash down into/end up in finish the oceans. This causes excessive growth of algae in which grows the algaes that suffocate soffocated the marine plants.
Another sources of the oceans ocean pollution are is the plastic garbages, like plastic bags, which decompose very slowly. The plastic bags are blown into rivers and end up in the ocean, with the moviment of the water and window finishing in the rivers and in the oceans, where the marine animals, like sea birds, confusing confuse them with food/think they are edible. for fishing animals. Each year, a million of sea-birds died as a result of for the plastic garbages.
Finally, another source of the oceans pollution are is toxic chemicals. Until the 1970s chemical wastes were freely dumped into the oceans. Today it is not allowed by the laws, but some industries/factories/manufacturers manufacturies and disposal sities continue to pollute the oceans with toxic chemicals. These chemical wastes are very toxic and they are ingested from by the sea animals, and become part of the food chain, of which humans are a part. which can finish in the sea food, in ours food chain.
Algae is plural for alga, so there is no need to add an 's'.
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Pollution of oceans (or perhaps 'Oceanic pollution')
The pollution of the* oceans is a big problem. 80%** of the pollution of oceans originate from land: 12% from oils and 36% from cities and factories. In fact, the farmers use fertilizers and a lot of them finish end up in oceans, facilitating the growth of algaes (singular: alga / plural: algae) that suffocate the marine plants.
Other sources of the oceanic pollution are the plastic garbages, like plastic bags, which decompose very slowly. The plastic bags, with the movement of the water and window (not sure what you mean by 'window') finishing end up in the rivers and in the oceans, where the marine animals, like sea birds, confuse them for fish/marine animals. Each year, a million of seabirds died for from the consumption of plastic garbages.
Finally, another source of the pollution of oceans are toxic chemicals. Until the 1970s chemical wastes had been freely dumped into the oceans. Today it is (not?) allowed by the laws, but some manufacturing plants/factories and disposal sites continue to pollute the oceans with toxic chemicals. This chemical wastes is very toxic and they are is ingested by the sea animals, which can finish end up in the seafood in our food chain.
*The 'the' isn't really necessary here because we are discussing about oceans in general, not specific oceans. Same for the 'farmers', and 'marine plants' in general. In English, we don't use the article 'the' as often as in Italian, Spanish or French.
**In English, the '%' symbol is rarely separated by a space from the number.
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Oceans pollution
The pollution of the oceans is a big problem.80 % of the oceans pollution are originated on from land: 12 % from oils and 36 % from cities and factories. In fact, the farmers use fertilizers and a lot of them finish in the oceans, in which grows the algaes that soffocated the marine plants.
Other source of the oceans pollution are the plastic garbages, like plastic bags, which decomposly very slow. The plastic bags with the moviment of the water and window finishing in the rivers and in the oceans, where the marine animals, like sea birds, confusing them for fishing animals. Each year, a million of sea-birds died for the plastic garbages.
Finally, other source of the oceans pollution are toxic chemicals. Until 1970s chemical wastes were freely dumped into the oceans. Today is allowed by the laws, but some manufacturies and disposal sities continue to pollute the oceans with toxic chemicals. These chemical wastes are very toxic and they are ingested from the sea animals, which can finish in the sea food, in ours food chain.
It is an important issue ~
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