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Hello, every one , my name is candy , I'm come form China,I've been learning English in italki for two days，I'm very happy, because I meet many frends in itaiki , Thy teach me study english translate and speek, thanks a lot， But I only speak Chinese, If you want ,I would be happy to teach you Chinese，I would try my best to teach you Chinese. I have strong interest in English,So, I hope to make more friends here，I hope one day I can translate some articles and Easily communicate with foreign friends . That's All ,Thanks

- I'm come : you can't say I + am + verb in present simple , instead you can say " I am coming from.." or simply "I am from.."
- English in italki for two days: italki is a tool or website so you can say "via italki two days ago" because you started with "I've been" so you will use "ago" for present perfect continuous

- I meet many friends: You can either say " I am meeting" or " I have met" and the second one is better since it started in the past and continues till now ( present prefect )

- They teach me study English translate and speak: I think you meant " They are teaching me" because its happening now not everyday in your life time, or you could say " They have been teaching me" since it started in the past and continues till now.

Note: any action that has started in the past and it continues till now, use ( present prefect )

Hope that helps

Hi Candy! I'll try to rewrite it for you. I hope it would help.:)

Hello everyone, my name is Candy and I'm form China. I've been learning English via Italki for two days already, and I'm very happy because I have met many friends. They have taught me in studying English by translating and speaking, thanks a lot! I only speak Chinese and if you want, I would be happy to teach you Chinese. I will try my best to teach you Chinese. I have strong interest in English and I'm hoping to make more friends here. I also hope that one day I can translate some articles,  and easily communicate with my foreign friends. That's all, thanks.