The strongest rooster!

Lost of hens live at my home. They spend most of their time in a garden. Several roosters live among these hens. The rooster are always fighting each other. I think it's because they want the sexiest hens by their sides! ) Of course, they would, who would't want that?! :) ) Anyway, for them the foremost question is, who is the strongest rooster? All day, every day they fight each other to see who the strongest rooster is. Of course, All the efforts are worth it! :) :) The strongest rooster has lots of advantages over the other roosters. First, he will have all the hens all the time, anytime! he will have the most food, and so on.  In my view, his best and most cherished advantage over others is the reputation of being the strongest rooster.  All hens and roosters will believe that he is the strongest rooster. Why is this his most worthwhile advantage? Because, others will believe that he is the strongest, so they will rarely try to fight him for the reputation of being the strongest rooster; . even if there were a stronger rooster,  they would not fight him becaue they would believe that he is the strongest. So, the strongest rooster will probably stay the strongest for a long time.


When the next generation of hens appear, I mean when chicks become adults, most of them will tend to accept that the strongest rooster is really the strongest. However, there will always be a few rebels among them! These rebels won't accept that the strongest rooster is really the strongest. They will fight the strongest rooster for the reputation of being the strongest. You know, most of these rebels will be defeated during the first fights because, first of all, the strongest rooster is really strong; second, he believes so; third, the others, even the rebels will believe that he is the strongest. Most of at the rebels deafeated on the first fight, will give it up and won't fight again. Most of the time, the strongest rooster will stay the strongest for the next generation too, but not always. Some times a rebel who was defeated, will not give up. He will continue to fight. He will be defeated again and again but does not give up. Since he will not give up, he will learn more and more and will become stronger and stronger. To tell the truth, sometimes this rooster will die because of severe injuries, but not always. Sometimes the defeated rebel will resist for a long time. He fights and fights so that the strongest rooster will be defeated. There will be a new strongest rooster. And this is a self-perpetuating process.

The strongest rooster!

Lots of hens live at my home. They spend most of their time in a garden. Several roosters live among these hens. The roosters are always fighting each other. I think it's because they want the sexiest hens on their sides! Of course they want that, who doesn't? Anyway, for them the foremost question is: who is the strongest rooster? All day every day they fight each other for being the strongest rooster. Of course, all efforts are worth it! The strongest rooster has a lot of advantages over the other roosters. First, he will have all the hens all time anytime! He will have the most foods, and so on. In my view, his best and most cherished advantage over others is the reputation of the strongest rooster. All hens and roosters believe that he is the strongest rooster. Why is this his most worthwhile advantage? Others believe that he is the strongest, so they rarely try to fight him for the reputation of the strongest rooster; even if there were stronger rooster, they would not fight him because they believe he is the strongest. So, the strongest rooster will probably stay the strongest for a long time.

When the next generation of hens appear, I mean when chickens become adults, most of them tend to accept that the strongest rooster is really the strongest. However, there will always be a few rebels among them! These rebels won't accept that the strongest rooster is really the strongest. They will fight the strongest rooster for the reputation of the strongest. You know, most of the rebels will be defeated at their first fight. First of all, the strongest rooster is really strong. Second, he believes so and third, because others (even rebels) believe that he is the strongest. Most of rebels who were defeated in their first fight will give it up and won't fight again. Most of the time the strongest rooster will stay the strongest for the next generation too, but not always. Sometimes a rebel who was defeated does not give up. He continues to fight. He will be defeated again and again, but does not give up. Since he does not give up, he learns more and more and becomes stronger and stronger. To tell the truth, sometimes this rooster dies because of severe injuries, but not always. Sometimes the defeated rebel resists for a long time. He fights and fights so that the strongest rooster will be defeated. There will be a new strongest rooster, and this is a self-perpetuating process.

The strongest rooster!

Lost of hens live at my home. (This is okay, but if you really want to impress you could say something like "I have a lot of hens at home" or something similar) They spend most of their time in a garden. Several roosters live among these henes. The roosters are always fighting each other. I think it's because they want the sexiest hens on their sides! Of course, they want the sexiest ones, who doesn't want wouldn't? :) Anyway, for them the most foremost important question is, who is the strongest rooster? All day every day they fight each other for being to be the strongest rooster. Of course, all the efforts is worth it! :) :) The strongest rooster has lots of advantages over other roosters. First, he will have all of the hens all time anytime! He will have the most foods, and so on. In my view, his best and most cherished (obvious, maybe?) advantage over others is the reputation of the strongest rooster. All hens and roosters believe that he is the strongest rooster. Why is this his most worthwhile advantage? Others believe that he is the strongest, so they rarely try to fight him for the reputation of the strongest rooster; even if there were stronger rooster, they would not fight him because they believed that he is the strongest. So, the strongest rooster will probably stay the strongest for a long time.


When the next generation of hens appear, I mean when chickens become adults, most of them tend to accept that the strongest rooster is really the strongest. However, there will always be a few rebels among them! These rebels won't accept that the strongest rooster is really the strongest. They will fight the strongest rooster for the reputation of being the strongest. You know, most of rebels will be defeated at the first fights because first of all, the strongest rooster is really strong; second, he believes so; third, others even rebels believe that he is the strongest. Most of the rebels are defeated at in the first fight defeated rebels, and will give it up and won't fight again. Most of the time the strongest rooster will stay the strongest for the next generation too, but not always. Sometimes a rebel who was defeated does not give up. He continues to fight. He will be defeated again and again but does not give up. Since he does not give up, he learns more and more and becomes stronger and stronger. To tell the truth, sometimes this rooster dies because of severe injuries, but not always. Some times the defeated rebel resists for a long time. He fights and fights so that the strongest rooster will be defeated. There will be a new strongest rooster. And this is a self-perpetuating process.

(Not bad. Interesting story! Watch your plurals. That was the biggest problem I came across. Other than that, you communicate your ideas quite well.)

The strongest rooster!

Lots of hens live at my home, but they spend most of their time in a garden. Several roosters live among these hens. The rooster are always fighting each other. I think it's because they want the sexiest hens on their sides! Of course, they want them, who doesn't want them! :) Anyway, for them the foremost question is, who is the strongest rooster? They fight each other all day  to prove that they are strongest rooster. Of course, It's worth all the effort ! :) :) The strongest rooster has lots of advantages over other roosters. First, he will have any hen he wants at anytime he may want. He will have most food, and so on. In my view, he is best and most cherished with a great advantage over the others. This is the reputation of the strongest rooster. All hens and roosters believe that he is the strongest rooster. Why is this his most worthwhile advantage? Others believe that he is the strongest, so they rarely try to fight him for the reputation of the strongest rooster. Even if there were a stronger rooster, they would not fight him becaue they believed that he is the strongest. So, the strongest rooster will probably stay the strongest for a long time.


When they the hens and roosters are fully grown and a new generation comes along, most of them tend to accept that the strongest rooster is really the strongest. However, there will always be a few rebels among them. These rebels won't accept that the strongest rooster is really the strongest and will challenge him. They will fight the strongest rooster for the reputation of the strongest. You know, most of rebels will be defeated at the first fights because first of all, the strongest rooster is really strong; second, he believes so; third, others even rebels believe that he is the strongest. Most of the first fights the rebels are defeated, because they will give it up and won't fight again. Most of the time the strongest rooster will remain the strongest for the next generation too, but not always. Sometimes a defeated rebel does not give up. He continues to fight. He will be defeated again and again but does not give up. Since he does not give up, he learns more and more and becomes stronger and stronger. To tell the truth, sometimes this rooster dies because of the severe injuries, but not always. Sometimes the defeated rebel resists for a long time. He fights and fights until the strongest rooster is defeated. There will be a new strongest rooster, and this is a self-perpetuating process.