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Conclusion of Help! I'm trapped in a vampire's body. Could you correct this? :) Help! I am trapped in a vampire body, is a humorous book. For people of all ages who like fantastic fiction. It is a good reading experience, because it is funny how Jake never thinks things through. The author allowed with this book to give an enjoyable reading, to go out people of their daily routine, because we as human get worry for insignificant things. Which make our life stressed. The author pretends to convince to his readers, to take Jake and his friends as an example to how take life. So, he hopes that it causes his readers to make transformations in their own lives.

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Conclusion of Help! I'm trapped in a vampire's body.

Could you correct this? :)
Help! I am trapped in a vampire body, is a humorous book. For people of all ages who like fantastic fiction. It is a good reading experience, because it is funny how Jake never thinks things through. The author allowed with this book to give an enjoyable reading, to go out people of their daily routine, because we as human get worry for insignificant things. Which make our life stressed. The author pretends to convince to his readers, to take Jake and his friends as an example to how take life. So, he hopes that it causes his readers to make transformations in their own lives.

 

 Help!  I am trapped in a vampire is a humorous book for people of all ages who like  [fantasy] fiction. It is a good read because it is amusing ( funny might mean strange here) how Jake never thinks things through.

[ The author created an enjoyable reading experience with this book that takes people out of their daily routine because we all, as humans, get worried about insignificant things---which makes our lives stressful. 

 (Sorry, I am not clear of your meaning  after this, for example 'take life' usually means to kill, but perhaps you mean ' take life on the chin', meaning to survive troubles bravely or perhaps how to live life] 

The author pretends to believe Jake and his friends are examples of how to take life in order to convince his readers to do so, Thus, he hopes, to cause them to make  transformations in their own liv

 Geoff

 

 

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Conclusion of Help! I'm trapped in a vampire's body.

Could you correct this? :)
Help! I am trapped in a vampire body, is a humorous book. For people of all ages who like fantastic fiction. It is a good reading experience, because it is funny how Jake never thinks things through. The author allowed with this book to give an enjoyable reading, to go out people of their daily routine, because we as human get worry for insignificant things. Which make our life stressed. The author pretends to convince to his readers, to take Jake and his friends as an example to how take life. So, he hopes that it causes his readers to make transformations in their own lives.

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