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Pratice: An Essay Nowadays we are assisting to an incredible increase of trash TV programmes in our public channels. It is true that they are increasing their audience with these kind of programmes, but are they doing well? Firstly, I think that our society is spending too much time in front of the TV. One kid can stay watching TV for a long time, so he is listening messages during this period. If the messages that he listened are wrong (or maybe dangerous), the kid could develop wrong behaviours. Furthermore, we are paying expensive wages to people without any talent. They earn their salary criticizing other people and creating stories without any evidence. And it is a dangerous example for our children... In my opinion we need a several change in our entertainment habits. We usually say that reading a good book is the best way to spend our free time, and it is true. But it is not the only way. We can watch TV with a relaxing cup of tea in our sofa, but we need to find the correct TV programme. For instance, there are a lot of good TV series with an amazing work behind, and they are highly-recommended. In a nutshell, we are responsible about TV channels schedule because we are the customers. If we do not watch trash TV anymore, I am sure that they will erase this kind of programmes in a short period of time.

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Pratice: An Essay

Nowadays we are assisting to witnessing (or: seeing) an incredible increase of in trash TV programmes in on our public channels. It is true that they are increasing their audience with these kinds of programmes, but are they doing well?

Firstly (don't use 'firstly' unless you use 'secondly' later in the text), I think that our society is spends too much time in front of the TV. One A kid (better: child) can stay keep watching TV for a long time, so he is listening to messages during this period (better: the entire time). If the messages that he listened hears are wrong (or maybe (better: even) dangerous), the kid (better: child) could develop wrong undesirable behaviours. Furthermore, we are paying expensive high wages to people without any talent. They earn their salary by criticizing other people and by creating stories without any evidence. And it is a dangerous example for our children...

In my opinion, we need a severe (better: big) change in our entertainment habits. We usually say that reading a good book is the best way to spend our free time, and it is true. But it is not the only way. We can watch TV with a relaxing cup of tea in on our sofa, but we need to find the correct TV programme. For instance, there are a lot of good TV series with an amazing work behind them, and they are highly recommended.

In a nutshell, we are responsible about for TV channels schedule because we are the customers. If we do not watch trash TV anymore, I am sure that they will erase remove these kinds of programmes (or: this kind of programme) in a short period of time.

 

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Hi Robert. I Totally agree With You. The tv program has huge influence to youngsters. The messages it delivers must be positive, otherwise it is horrible.

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