Advantages of writing
I like to write something. I am trying to keep my diary everyday. Even though I write very short, but I like writing my feeling. Sometimes I am sad, and sometimes I am happy. I think to write diary when I am sad is good for me. It helps me to calm down. To tell my feeling to someone is nice way. However, maybe it will very hard for me. So l think to keep my diary is good.
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Advantages of writing
I like to write something. I am trying to keep my diary everyday. Even though I write very short entries, but I like writing about my feelings. Sometimes I am sad, and sometimes I am happy. I think to writing a diary when I am sad is good for me. It helps me to calm down. To tell my feeling to someone would be good. is nice way. However, maybe it will be very hard for me. So l think to keeping my diary is good.0
Advantages of writing
I like to write something. I am trying to keep write in my diary everyday. Even though what I write is very short, but I like writing about my feelings.* Sometimes I am sad, and sometimes I am happy. I think to write writing in a diary when I am sad is good for me. It helps me to calm down. To tell my feeling to someone is nice way.(?**) However, maybe it will it might be very hard for me. So l think to keeping a my diary is good.*You don't need to use both "even though" and "but" in the same sentence.
**무슨 말이에요? Not sure what you mean here.
영어를 잘해요! 저도 일기를 쓰기 좋아해요.ㅎㅎ :)
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