My diary the 8th of May I got up at 9p.m. Then I studied English for about 2 hours. After having lunch at home, I went to the shopping mall which took 30 minutes by bus from my house. I was gonna to

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Kumiko Aika

My diary the 8th of May I got up at 9p.m. Then I studied English for about 2 hours. After having lunch at home, I went to the shopping mall which took 30 minutes by bus from my house. I was gonna to buy some clothes wearing in Los Angels next week. I've been walking around to find good clothes, however in the end,I couldn't buy anything clothes. But fortunately,I managed to get shoes cheap that was seeking these day to wear in my workplace. After shopping,I worked. My shift was supposed to work at 10p.m. but I finished work at 9:30p.m. Then I got back at home at 10p.m.

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My diary for the 8th of May

I got up at 9am.
Then I studied English for about 2 hours.
After having lunch at home,
I went to the shopping mall which took 30 minutes by bus from my house.
I was gonna buy some clothes to wear in Los Angels next week.
I walked around looking for some suitable cloths,
however, in the end, I couldn't find anything.
But fortunately,I managed to get cheap shoes which I was looking for to wear at work.
After shopping,I went to work.
My shift was supposed to end at 10pm but I finished work at 9:30pm.
Then I got back at home at 10pm.

My diary the 8th of May

I got up at 9a.m.
Then I studied English for about 2 hours.
After having lunch at home,
I went to the shopping mall which took 30 minutes by bus from my house.
I was gonna to buy some clothes wearing to wear in Los Angels next week.
I've been walking around to find looking for good clothes,
however in the end, I couldn't didn't buy anything clothes.
But fortunately I managed to get shoes cheap that was seeking these day I wanted to wear in my workplace.
After shopping, I worked.
My shift was supposed to work end at 10p.m. but I finished work at 9:30p.m.
Then I got back at home at 10p.m.

I just want to point out one mistake the other two guys missed. It's spelled Los Angeles. Have fun when you go!

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