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Doyle Dane Bernbach became the pioneer of a style which was eventually called “The New Advertising”. Many writers and art directors joined the agencies and advertising reached its zenith in the 1960´s. The notion of creative advertising grew and if decades ago, famous actors and actresses were hired as ad models, in 1950s ad agencies created their own superstars: Marlboro cowboys and Tiger Tony are some of the examples.
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Doyle Dane Bernbach became the pioneer of a style which was eventually called “The New Advertising”. Many writers and art directors joined advertising agencies and advertising reached its zenith in the 1960s. The notion of creative advertising grew to the point where. if decades ago, famous actors and actresses were hired as ad models, in the 1950s ad agencies created their own superstars: the Marlboro cowboys and Tony the tiger being some of the examples.A style of what?
"...famous actors and actresses were hired as ad models, in the 1950s ad agencies created their own superstars...": This sentence is awkward. It doesn't really show the "contrast" well. Normally these types of sentences will sound closer to, "where, if ______ (had to/ needed to/ were able to) _____, in _____, _____ (could/ were able to/ had the freedom to/ had the power to) _________.
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