A Journey to Jinan
I trival often for work. My itinerary go through several cities. One of my old friend living in Jinan City where I have passed many times . But I had never stop to visit her until last Saturday.
My friend and I were calssmates during college, and then studied for master's degree in different University. Now we are both working since two years ago. We haven't met each other for about five years.
We slept together in her small room. She cooked breakfast for me and led me to the Park of Spouting Spring and the Daming Lake Park. I had been wanted to go to the Daming Lake for a long time because of a classic lines "do you still remember a girl named Xia Yuhe by the Daming lakefront?". And I wanted to see the Spouting Spring very much too, because I read about it when I was very young and it was described beautiful.
To my disappointment the water level is low in this season, but I still enjoyed the fascinating beauty of them in spring. I will come here again after the rainy season and take photos with my friend.
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A Journey to Jinan
I travel often for work. My itinerary was to go through several cities. One of my old friends lives in Jinan City where I have passed many times . But I had never stopped to visit her until last Saturday.My friend and I were classmates during college, but then she studied for a master's degree in a different University. We've both been working for two years now. We haven't seen each other for about five years.
We slept together in her small room. She cooked breakfast for me and led me to the Park of Spouting Spring and the Daming Lake Park. I had been wanting to go to the Daming Lake for a long time because of a classic lines "do you still remember a girl named Xia Yuhe by the Daming lakefront?". And I wanted to see the Spouting Spring very much too, because I read about it when I was very young and it was described as beautiful.
To my disappointment the water level is low in this season, but I still enjoyed the fascinating beauty of it in spring. I will come here again after the rainy season and take photos with my friend.
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I have an idea : you can discribe a dream that when you walked along daming lake you feel about "I am xia ziwei or xiao yanzi",and story continues...
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A Journey to Jinan
I trival travel often for work. My itinerary go goes through several cities. One of my old friends living lives/is living in Jinan City where I have passed been many times. But However, I had never stop stopped to visit her until last Saturday.My friend and I were classmates during college, and then studied for our master's degrees in different Universities. Now we are both working since two years ago Now we have both been working for two years. We haven't met each other for about five years.
We slept together in her small room. She cooked breakfast for me and led/took me to the Park of Spouting Spring and the Daming Lake Park. I had wanted/been wanting to go to the Daming Lake for a long time because of the classic lines "do you still remember a girl named Xia Yuhe by the Daming lakefront?". And I I also wanted to see the Spouting Spring very much too, because I read about it when I was very young and it was described as beautiful.
To my disappointment the water level is low in this season, but I still enjoyed the fascinating beauty of them in spring. I will come here again after the rainy season and take photos with my friend.
Fantastic English! Keep going :-D
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MY NAME IS XIAO LI
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