Today is Mother's Day :-)
Happy Mother's Day to my mom and the mother on italki. Sorry, I didn't know today is mother's day till this noon.
I'm busy in preparing the TOEFL test and school works every days. I used to call my mom every Sunday, but, this semester, I have a lot of works to do every day, so I usually forgot to call her. Several times, she called me and I realized that I didn't talk with her for several weeks.
My mom loves me very much. Now, I study in a city far from my hometown and back home only in summer and winter holiday. I knew she misses me. I wanted to study abroad, which means I will leave her farther and the times I back home would decrease. Studying abroad takes a great deal of money, however my mom agreed. One holiday, when she was cooking, I chatted with her about my study. She asked me, did you feel lonely when you at school and will you feel lonely when you study abroad? Can I go abroad with you? I felt that my mom's voice was trembling and tears in our eyes. Words can hardly express my gratitude to mom.
As I grow older, the schools I study in are farther and farther away from home. After watching a movie named Nuovo cinema Paradiso, I determined to study in a university located in other province and to experience some different culture when I was a high school student. My mom want me to work in my hometown which is located in a city between Guangzhou and Shenzhen after graduation. But I'm not sure, I would like to have a job in Shenzhen or Guangzhou.
I hope my parents can enrich their life when I'm not at their side to accompany. What I written was the thoughts flow through my mind, so it's messy. ;-)
What date is it today in your Country? Did you say happy mother's day to your mom? :-D
PS:
Here is the line from Nuovo cinema Paradiso, which motivated me to make the decision to study farther and want to find a job outside my hometown.
" Alfredo: Living here day by day, you think it's the center of the world. You believe nothing will ever change. Then you leave: a year, two years. When you come back, everything's changed. The thread's broken. What you came to find isn't there. What was yours is gone. You have to go away for a long time… many years… before you can come back and find your people. The land where you were born. But now, no. It's not possible. Right now you're blinder than I am. "
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你真愛你的媽媽!都起來的時候我感覺很感人,我母親節提前3天我和我妹妹一起去買禮物送給我媽媽,看到我媽媽開心我們沒忘記母親節。還想到她。
我剛剛幫你改錯,你要注意你的Verb tenses和plural forms 一點。希望你可以進步 ^^
Anyway 加油考試
祝好,
JS.
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Today is Mother's Day :-)
Happy Mother's Day to my mom and All the mothers on italki. Sorry, I didn't know today is mother's day till this noon.I'm have been busy in preparing for the TOEFL test and doing school works every thesedays. I used to call my mom every Sunday, but, this semester, I have to do a lot of works to do every day, so I usually forget to call her (Use the present tense here since it is a fact). Several times, she called me and I realised that I didn't haven't talked spoken with her for several weeks. (Use the present perfect tense here instead of past simple)
My mom loves me very much. Now, I study in a city far from my hometown and I am back home only during summer and winter holiday. I knew know she misses me (A fact hence present simple tense). I wanted to study abroad, which means I will leave her even farther and the times I back home would decrease. Studying abroad takes costs a great deal of money, however my mom agreed. One holiday, when she was cooking, I chatted with her about my study. She asked me, did you feel lonely when you at school and will you feel lonely when you study abroad? Can I go abroad with you? I felt that my mom's voice was trembling and tears in our eyes. Words can hardly express my gratitude to mom.
As I grew older, the schools where I went studying are farther and farther away from home. After watching a movie named Nuovo cinema Paradiso, I determined to realised that studying in a university located in other province and to experience exposed me to some different cultures than when I were a high school student. My mom wants me to work in my hometown which is located in a city between Guangzhou and Shenzhen after graduation. But I'm not sure if I would like to have a job in Shenzhen or Guangzhou.
I hope my parents can enrich their life when I'm not at their side to accompany. What I written were the thoughts that flew through my mind, so it's quite messy. ;-)
What date is it today in your Country? Did you say happy mother's day to your mom? :-D
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You are a wonderful boy that you have your own thougts.I wish i had your courage when i was at your age,then i wont regret every day.i wish your dream come true.Hang on ,buddy!Good luck!
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