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Description, could you check it please? I want to talk about a very important person to me: my cousin. She’s name is Federica and she is 17 years old. She lives with her family in Rome, in the same flat of my grandma and we are cousin because my father and her mother are brothers. She studies languages and she practices volleyball like I did. She has a brother and a boyfriend who loves her very much. She has long brown straight hair, brown eyes and a big beautiful smile. She’s not very tall, but it is perfect for her age. She normally wears sport clothes but for big events she put on graceful clothes to be more beautiful than she’s always is. I think she is one of the best person in the world, because she is always happy, she makes everyone smile , it’s difficult to see her sad or upset. You can talk with her of everything you want, she listen to you and she always tries to help you. I really love her, I’m happy when I’m with her and we laugh all the time! I’m really glad to have her in my life and in my family. I’m glad to share with her the same blood.

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Description, could you check it please?

I want to talk about a very important person to me: my cousin.

Her name is Federica, and she is 17 years old. She lives with her family in Rome, in

the same flat as my grandma, and we are cousins because my father and her mother

are sister and brother. She studies languages and she practices volleyball like I did. She has a

brother and a boyfriend who loves her very much.

She has long brown straight hair, brown eyes and a big beautiful smile. She’s not

very tall, but her height is perfect for her age. She normally wears sport clothes but for big

events she puts on graceful clothes to look more beautiful than she always does. I think

she is one of the best people in the world, because she is always happy, she makes

everyone smile , it’s difficult to see her sad or upset. You can talk with her about

anything;  she listens to you and she always tries to help you. I really love

her, I’m happy when I’m with her and we laugh all the time!

I’m really glad to have her in my life and in my family.

I’m glad to share the same blood with her.
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Description, could you check it please?

I want to talk about a very important person to me: my cousin.
Her name is Federica and she is 17 years old. She lives with her family in my grandma's flat, in Rome. We are cousins because my father and her mother are brother and sister. She studies languages and she practices volleyball like I did. She has a brother and a boyfriend who loves her very much. She has long, straight brown hair, brown eyes and a big, beautiful smile. She’s not very tall, but her height is perfect for her age. She usually wears sports clothes, but for big events she put on graceful clothes to look more beautiful than she always does. I think she is one of the best people in the world because she is always happy, she makes everyone smile , it’s difficult to see her sad or upset. You can talk with her about anything you want, she listens to you and she always tries to help you. I really love her, I’m happy when I’m with her and we laugh all the time when we are together!

I’m really glad to have her in my life and in my family. I’m glad we share the same blood.  :)

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