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I went to glasslands with my friend on International Labour Day.It was the second time we have got there.
BaShang glasslands are located in ChengDe.I was glad I can drive my car on highway,and there are many amazing sceneries on both sides of the highway.
Different from other famous sight spots, there was a little people in there.We drove the car slowly and appreciated the csenery on the road.I like this kind of leisure feeling.
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I went to glasslands the grasslands with my friend on International Labour Day. It was the second time we have got gone there.
BaShang glasslands Grasslands are located in ChengDe. I was glad to I can drive my car on the highway, and there is are many amazing sceneries scenery (usually not plural) on both sides of the highway.
Different from other famous sights spots, there were few was a little people in there. We drove the car slowly and appreciated the csenery scenery on by the road.I like (not wrong here, but "enjoy" would be better) this feeling kind of leisure feeling.
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Please help me to correct it
I went to the grasslands with my friend on International Labour Day. It was the second time we have been there.BaShang grasslands are located in ChengDe. I was glad I could drive my car on the highway and there were many amazing scenes on both sides of the highway.
Different to other famous sights, there were few people there. We drove the car slowly and appreciated the scenery on the road. I like this kind of leisurely feeling.
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