Is it better tp enjoy your money when your earn it or to save it money for some time in the future?
Spending what your earn is a very famous household trend today. It can be very satisfying buy a lot of new stuff and life whit a very high life standard. Nevertheless you should safe your money for some time in the future by virtue of the following reasons:
Firstly, if you spend all you money as fast as your earn it, you are very limited in your possibilities of decision making. If you for example decide to make a certain master, which is required by your company to get a promotion and you haven’t safe any money you need to safe money for the next 5 years before you finally can do what you’ve decided to do. Therefor you must safe money if you will remain flexible and adaptable in life.
Secondly, you need to safe some money to gain a financial cushion and be prepared for some inconveniences in life. If a family member for example has an accident or gets sick, you may need some money to help him and pay for the surgery or the medial cure. If you haven’t any that can finish fatal for the affected person and also for your conscience.
Another reason to safe money is older care. Everyone of us knows that the pension isn’t safe anymore. Therefore everyone must take care of himself and safe enough money to have a good evening of life, to make it possible to afford the drugs you need and to pay for your retirement home.
Finally, it can be very satisfactorily to know that trough your hard work you was be able to safe all the money on your bank account and that you are a responsible person because now you can benefit from all the previously mentioned reasons.
Trough all the reasons previously explained you should still keep going on spending money and enjoying your life, but you should also safe a certain amount whenever its possible.
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Is it better to enjoy your money when your earn it, or to save it money for some time in the future? (either "save it for some time" or "save money for some time" work; "save it" has better flow, but they're both good!)
Spending what your earn is a very famous well-known household trend today ("famous" feels awkward here; "popular" would also work). It can be very satisfying to buy a lot of new stuff and life live with a very high life standard standard of living. Nevertheless, you should safe save your money for some time in the future by virtue of for the following reasons: ("by virtue of" is usually used in place of "because of," but it feels awkward here I think because there isn't any causation involved?)Firstly, if you spend all your money as fast as your earn it, you are very limited in your possibilities of decision making what decisions you can make (or: "your decision making is very limited"). If you, for example, decide to make a certain master get a master's degree that, which is required by your company to get a promotion and you haven’t safe saved any money, you need to safe save money for the next 5 years before you finally can do what you’ve decided to do. (This sentence is technically okay, but in terms of style, it is difficult to read because it is so long; instead, I would say "For example, if you want a promotion which requires a master's degree but haven't saved any money, you would need to save money for years before you were able to do what you had decided to do.) Therefore, you must safe save money if you will want to (or "are to") remain flexible and adaptable in life.
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Secondly, you need to safe save some money to gain a financial cushion and be prepared for some inconveniences in life. If a family member, for example, has an accident or gets sick, you may need some money to help him and pay for the surgery or the medial cure medical care. If you haven’t any money for that, it can finish be fatal for the affected person and also detrimental to for your conscience.
Another reason to safe save money is older elder care (technically, though I would probably just say "retirement"). Everyone of us knows that the pensions isn’t aren't safe anymore. Therefore, everyone must take care of himself themselves and safe save enough money to have a good evening of life (this makes sense and is really poetic in English, but I would say "last chapter of life" instead), to make it possible to afford the drugs you they need and to pay for your their retirement home.Finally, it can be very satisfactorily satisfactory ("satisfactory" is the adjective form) to know that you were able to save all the money in your bank account through your hard work and that you will be able to benefit because you were a responsible person who considered all the aforementioned reasons. trough your hard work you was be able to safe all the money on your bank account and that you are a responsible person because now you can benefit from all the previously mentioned reasons. (There are a few too many ideas in your original sentence)
Trough For all the aforementioned reasons previously explained, you should still keep going on spending money and enjoying your life, but you should also safe save a certain amount whenever its possible.
Please let me know if you have any questions!!
:) devan
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If you follow Keynsian Economics, you spend. Austrian Economics, you save.
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