Be nice to children
To a large extent, I believe that children are given too much free time.
Free time, in my opinion, refers to time not spent under the direct supervision of a parent, a teacher or a person entrusted with the responsibility of bringing up the child. Such time is often spent on several things such as watching television,playing with friends,going to parties,doing home work,playing games on their own among others.
Among all of the above, a child could either be influenced by what he or she watches on TV most of which are those not meant to be viewed by the child's age group.
In my opinion,most of the formative years of a child should be spent doing school work, engaging in recreational activities that would develop the child emotionally and mentally. I believe this strongly because at a young age, a child is quick to grasp most of what is seen or heard.
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Be nice to children
To a large extent, I believe that children are given too much free time.Free time, in my opinion, refers to time not spent under the direct supervision of a parent, a teacher or a person entrusted with the responsibility of bringing up the child. Such time is often spent on several things such as watching television, playing with friends, going to parties, doing homework, playing games on their own among others.
Among all of the above, a child could either be influenced by what he or she watches on TV, most of which are those programs not meant to be viewed by the child's age group.
In my opinion most of the formative years of a child should be spent doing school work, engaging in recreational activities that would develop the child emotionally and mentally. I strongly believe this because at a young age, a child is quick to grasp most of what is seen or heard.
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Be Nice to Children
To a large extent, I believe that children are given too much free time.Free time, in my opinion, refers to time that is not spent under the direct supervision of a parent, a teacher or a carer. Their time is often spent on several things; such as watching television,playing with friends,going to parties, doing homework, and playing games on their own or with others.
Among all of the above, a child could either be negatively (?) influenced by what he or she watches on TV, as most programmes are not meant to be viewed by the child's age group.*
In my opinion, most of the formative years of a child should be spent doing school work, and engaging in recreational activities that would develop the child emotionally and mentally. I strongly believe this, because from a young age, a child is quick to grasp most of what is seen or heard around them.
This is an interesting argument and you make some good points! Try not to over complicate your language, becomes sometimes your writing is difficult to follow!
*Do you mean this is the most problematic activity? Try and expand on this point.
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