Correct, please
1) She woke up at the very minute, when I come in the room.
2) She wrote the letter and now read the book.
3) They came out when it was still light and strong wind was blowing.
4) Fortunately, he didn't noticed her red eyes and didn't quessed that she cried.
5) My little brother yesterday at 14:00 was playing the violin, therefore could not came to you.
6) He had been playing the violin for one hours, when we came.
7) At last she was alone. The quests had left.
8) Jane had been very tried as she went the whole day om foot.
9) I never heard about this amazing incident.
10) I feel tried. I have been working all day.
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1)When I came into the room,inthat very moment, she woke up.(" at that very moment is an interrupting clause- it is not necessary to have in order to have a complete sentence, so in this instance, "at that very moment" sounds awkward.
2) She wrote the letter and read the book. The only way "now" is correct, is if it is placed in the beginning of the sentence.
3) They came outside when there was light and a strong wind was blowing.
4)Correct! Except the end can be- "he did not know/guess that she was crying. or he had not noticed that had been crying.
5)Yesterday, at two o'clock, my brother was playing the violin( I don't know if you mean this but you could say- he was taking violin lessons) and he could not see you( or you can use visit). or Because my little brother was playing the violin, yesterday, he could not see/visit you.
6)When we came, he had been playing the violin for an hour. Or : For an hour, he was playing the violin when we came.
7)At last, she was alone when the guests had left.
8) I do not know the context of the sentence
9) I have never heard of this amazing incident( Incident is not the right wrong and I do not know the context of the sentence so I can't figure out another word that can be used.
10) I'm tired because I have been working all day.
Good job! I hope my corrections were helpfull
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Here are my humble corrections:-
1) I came to the room. At that very moment, she woke up.
2) She wrote the letter and now she reads the book.
3) They came out when it was still light and strong wind was blowing. (I didn't get you here. I would say 'They came inside since there has been light and strong wind has been blowing)
4) Fortunately, he didn't notice her red eyes since he haven't though that she would cry.
5) My little brother was playing the Violin yesterday at 14:00. Therefore I could not come to you.
6) He had been playing the violin since one hour, when we came back.
7) At last, she became alone when the quests left (home).
8) Jane had been very tired as she traveled the whole day on foot.
9) I have never heard about this amazing incident.
10) I feel tired because I have been working all day.
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Correct, please
1) She woke up the minute I came into the room.2) She wrote the letter and is now reading the book.
3) They came out when it was still light out and a strong wind was blowing.
4) Fortunately, he didn't notice her red eyes and didn't guess that she cried.
5) My little brother was playing the violin yesterday at 14:00, therefore he could not come to you.
6) He had been playing the violin for one hour when we came.
7) At last she was alone. The guests had left.
8) Jane was very tired because she went the whole day on foot.
9) I never heard about this amazing incident.
10) I feel tired. I have been working all day.
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Correct, please
1) She woke up at the very minute when* I come in the room.2) She wrote the letter and now reads the book.
3) They came out when it was still light and a strong wind was blowing.
4) Fortunately, he didn't notice her red eyes and didn't guess that she had cried.
5) My little brother yesterday at 14:00 was playing the violin, therefore could not have come to you.
6) He had been playing the violin for one hour when we came.
7) At last she was alone. The guests had left.
8) Jane had been very tried as she had gone the whole day on foot.
9) I never heard about this amazing incident.
10) I feel tried. I have been working all day.
*when I came into.., or, that I came into.. are both good.
Very well written!
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