My daily rutine. My day a day depends on the day of the week. I usually wake up at 9.00 and I have breakfast immediately. Class days, in the morning I study very hard in the library, then, I have lunc

Search from various English teachers...

Belén

My daily rutine. My day a day depends on the day of the week. I usually wake up at 9.00 and I have breakfast immediately. Class days, in the morning I study very hard in the library, then, I have lunch early. I get a bus at 3.00 p.m to go to College. I stay there for seven hours approximately.My timetable is irregular. When I finish, I go fast to English lesson. I don't have much time because there's a long distance. At 10.30 p.m, I finish my hard day. I come back home, I have dinner and then, I do some exercise during 30 minutes while I'm listening to my favourite music. After a relaxing time, I go to sleep and my fantastic day finishes there.

Corrections · 8

My daily routine.

My day a day daily routine depends on the day of the week.
I usually wake up at 9.00 and I have breakfast immediately.
Class days, In the morning on class days, I study very hard in the library, then, I have lunch early. I get a bus at 3.00 p.m to go to College.
I stay there for about/approximately (mas o menos :-)) seven hours approximately.My timetable is irregular.
When I finish, I rush go fast to my English lesson. I don't have much time because it's a long way away.there's a long distance.
At 10.30 p.m, I finish my hard day. I come back home, I have dinner and then, I do some exercise during for 30 minutes while I'm listening to my favourite music.
After a relaxing time, I go to sleep and my fantastic day finishes there.

My daily rutine.

My day a day depends on the day of the week. -
I usually wake up at 9.00 and I have breakfast immediately. -syntax!
(ON) Class days, in the morning I study very hard in the library, then, I have lunch early. I get a bus at 3.00 p.m to go to College. -sentence structure
I stay there for seven hours approximately. My timetable is irregular. - Sentence Fragments. what has your irregular time table have to do with your class hours?
When I finish, I go fast to English lesson. I don't have much time because there's a long distance. - vocabulary
At 10.30 p.m, I finish my hard day. I come back home, I have dinner and then, I do some exercise during 30 minutes while I'm listening to my favourite music.
After a relaxing time, I go to sleep and my fantastic day finishes there. - Is your day hard or fantastic?

"After a relaxing time" - are you saying you've relaxed for some time or you have had a relaxing time?

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
My daily routine

My day depends on the day of the week.

I usually wake up at 9.00, and I immediately have breakfast.

ON class days, I spend the morning studying hard in the library, and then I have an early lunch. I get a bus at 3pm to go to College.

My time table is irregular. I stay there for approximately seven hours.

When I finish, I rush to my English lessons. I don't have much time to travel, because it is a long distance from my college.

at 10.30 pm, I finish my hard day. I come back home and I have dinner. Then I exercise for 30 minutes while listening to my favorite music.

After relaxing for some time, I go to sleep, and my (now) fantastic day finishes there.

---------------------------------------------

After relaxing for some time, I go to sleep. What a fantastic day I had! - sacarsm

My daily routine.

My day to a day routine depends on the day of the week.
I usually wake up at 9.00 and I have breakfast immediately.
Class days, in the morning I study very hard in the library, then, I have lunch early. I get a bus at 3.00 p.m to go to College.
I stay there for approximately seven hours approximately. My timetable is irregular.
When I finish, I quickly go fast to my English lesson. I don't have much time because it is far away. there's a long distance.
At 10.30 p.m, I finish my hard day. I come back home, I have dinner and then, I do some exercises for during 30 minutes while I'm listening to my favourite music.
After a relaxing time, I go to sleep and my fantastic day finishes there.

Nice journal entry Belén! Please find my corrections below. Very best, Lawrence

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today