Could you correct my sentences, please)

Could you correct my sentences, please)

Could you correct my sentences, please)

1. Tom is curious and reads lots of books, that’s why he is so such an all-round guy.
2. She took a letter from an envelope and recognised the familiar handwriting.
3. They went to the forest, left their track and went astrayed finally.(, strayed from the track and got lost.)(eventually they found the way back.)
4. Ann is on the strict diet because she wants to get fit. She refuses to eating any bread, or sweets. I admire her endurance(willpower/self-control).
5. When I arrive in your town, I would like you organise some sightseeing for me.
6. Ann breeds cats. There are a huge quantity(a vast number of/very many) of purebred kitties(kittens/cats) in her flat.
7. Ann keeps herself fit, so she restricts(limits/abstains from) smoking, drinking alcohol and eating junk food.
8. Do you play any instrument? - No, I just strum the guitar.
9. Ann is a keen sewer.(is keen on sewing) Her needleworks are masterpieces.
10. The fairy waved her wand, and Cinderella’s dirty clothes turned into gala attire.(a ballgown)

I would avoid using "sewer" for a person, because it also means a drain for sewerage.

"Do you play an instrument?", or even (in the right context) "Do you play?" are also fine.