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A day with ups and downs I thought for a long time about how to describe the day yesterday, and I chose a word, no, three words——ups and downs. In yesterday afternoon, there was a quarrel between my girlfriend and I, which was sparked off by that she wanted to buy something from Thail, but I objected her. That should had been a normal chat. But it had changed into a quarrel without warning, when it comes to shopping online. In my opinion, someone who always indulges in shopping online will be easy to ignore the importance of study and the truth of his lack of endurance and patience which is the most indispensable trait for a human who wants to be an elitist.And I desperately hope that my girlfriend won't be the one of this kind of people. I really wish that the people who I love can share struggles with me, not staying on the planet where I would not like to go. Yes, I can't put up with the mediocre life. Moreover, I can't put up with that my partney just would like to have a mediocre life. Although we were reconiled eventually, we still had some fundamantal divergence about value. She argued that I always ignored her emotion and had never understood her. So I didn't talk with her about what I worried about,but her worried about. I admitted that I did bad work in caring about her emotion and frustration. While after I was awared of that she just offerred her emotional needs and never asked what my needs was, I felt despair and upset. "Should I break up? When?How is her going to feel? " I asked myself in my heart. I didn't know about the future.

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A day with ups and downs

I thought for a long time about how to describe the day yesterday,and I chose a word,no,three words——ups and downs.In yesterday afternoon,there was a quarrel between my girlfriend and I ,which was sparked off by that she wanted to buy something from Thail ,but I objected her.That should had been a normal chat.But it had changed into a quarrel without warning,when it comes to shopping online.In my opinion,someone who always indulges in shopping online will be easy to ignore the importance of study and the truth of his lack of endurance and patience which is the most indispensable trait for a human who wants to be an elitist.And I desperately hope that my girlfriend won't be the one of this kind of people.
I really wish that the people who I love can share struggles with me,not staying on the planet where I would not like to go.Yes,I can't put up with the mediocre life.Moreover,I can't put up with that my partney just would like to have a mediocre life.
Although we were reconiled eventually,we still had some fundamantal divergence about value.She argued that I always ignored her emotion and had never understood her.So I didn't talk with her about what I worried about,but her worried about.I admitted that I did bad work in caring about her emotion and frustration.While after I was awared of that she just offerred her emotional needs and never asked what my needs was,I felt despair and upset.
"Should I break up?When?How is her going to feel?" I asked myself in my heart.I didn't know about the future.

 

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A day with ups and downs

I thought for a long time about how to describe the day yesterday,and I chose a word,no,three words——ups and downs. Yesterday afternoon,there was a quarrel between my girlfriend and I ,which was sparked because she wanted to buy something from Thail ,but I opposed her.That should have been a normal conversation, but it had changed into a quarrel without warning,when it comes to shopping online. In my opinion,someone who always indulges in shopping online can easily ignore the importance of studying, the truth of his lack of endurance, and patience which is the most indispensable trait for a human who wants to be an elitist. And I desperately hope that my girlfriend won't be the one of these kinds of people.
I really wish that the people who I love can share struggles with me, not stay on the planet where I would not like to go.Yes,I can't put up with the mediocre life.Moreover,I can't put up with my partner who just would like to have a mediocre life.
Although we reconciled eventually,we still had some fundamental divergence about value.She argued that I always ignore her emotions and had never understood her.So I didn't talk with her about what I worried about,but her worried about.I admitted that I did bad work in caring about her emotion and frustration.While after I was awared of that she just offerred her emotional needs and never asked what my needs was,I felt despair and upset. (what does this mean?)
"Should I break up?When?How is her going to feel?" I asked myself in my heart.I didn't know about the future.

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