Mother's day
Today,we go to shopping to Mother's Day.
The flower shop was crowded.
Last year,I send to kittchen goods to my mother.
It was my mother's request.
This year,we already send a gift to my mother.
So,we chouse a gift for my mother in law.
We choose a flower almost every year.
We found nice flower in front of the shop,
It was same to this year.
It will deliver the day after tomorrow.
For me,my children will make something in his kindergarden.
I don't know what my boy making this year!
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Mother's Day
Today, we went shopping for Mother's Day.The flower shop was crowded.
Last year, I sent some kitchen goods to my mother.
It was my mother's request.*
This year, we already sent a gift to my mother.
So, we chose a gift for my mother-in-law.
We choose a flower almost every year.
We found a nice flower in front of the shop,
It was same to this year.
It will be delivered the day after tomorrow.
For me, my children will make something in their kindergarten.
I don't know what my boy will be making this year!
*or, it was her request.
Very well written!
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Mother's day
Today,we went to shopping for Mother's Day.The flower shop was crowded.
Last year,I send sent some of my kitchen's goods to my mother.
It was my mother's request.
This year,we already send sent a gift to my mother.
So,we choose chose a gift for my mother in law.
We choose a flower almost every year.
We found a nice flower in front of the shop,
It was same to this year.
It will be delivered the day after tomorrow.
For me,my children will make something in his their kindergarden.
I don't know what my boy will be making this year!
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