My day !
Today is the last day i stay at home in my holiday time. Tomorrow, i'll back to the city to go to school. Luckily, i can meet my mother's friends who she lost contact with them for very long time. It's about 30 years from the last time my mom see them. They used to have a hard childhood but they are always side by together. And now, they found each other. It's so wonderful. They are very very happy and they talk about the past all day. I'm very glad to meet my mom's friends too.
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My day !
Today is my last day i stay at home for the holidays. Tomorrow, I'll be back in the city to go to school. Luckily, I got to meet my mother's friends who she had lost contact with them for very long time. It's been about 30 years since the last time my mom saw them. They had a hard childhood but they were always there for each other. And now, they've found each other again. It's so wonderful. They are very very happy and they talk about the past all day. I'm very glad to have met my mom's friends too.Notes: "There for each other" means that they were always together, and always supported and helped each other through the hard times. You can also use more exclamation marks (these things ! ) in a story like this. It's emotional! Sentences like "it's so wonderful." could easily be "it's so wonderful!" instead.
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