Diary of my life in Canada May 2
The sun gets dark slowly in Summer.
Today I talked with my friend for a long time.
We didn't notice we were talking for 3 hours!
I had so much fun:)
Half and 4 month are left for me to go to the school.
I'm getting sad.....and I'm also worried about my English skill.
Do you think my English skill is getting better?
Anyway, I need more time each day!!!!
I'm not enough for 24 hours!!!!!
I have to do many things in here.
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Diary of my life in Canada May 2
The sun gets dark slowly in Summer.Today I talked with my friend for a long time. We didn't notice we were talking for 3 hours!
We didn't notice we were talking for 3 hours!
I had so much fun:)
I have four and a half months left at school.
I'm getting sad... and I'm also worried about my English skill.
Do you think my English is getting better?
Anyway, I need more time each day!!!!
24 hours is not enough for me!!!!
I have so many things to do over here.
Small corrections above for you :) I would suggest reading books you are interested in, particularly fiction to help improve your writing. A lot of English natives are at the same level as you and we suggest the same then to get them used to longer sentences. It is all about practice, so don't get sad! Try your best and be happy you are giving it your all! :)
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