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Practicing a Narration writing 2 Type: narration Title: an experience that taught you a lesson There is a popular activity about chair racing. It is from Japan. This time, they organise it in Taipei and I take part in it. It is not an easy race because some of competitors not only custom a chair for themselves but also practice it for a long time before they join the race. Although I’m not good at it than other people, I enjoy every exciting moment. However, I’m so nervous before the race and a competitor told me that listen to music can warm you up. But I only take a deep breath before the race. In the end, I fall down and get hurt while the race so I lose. Nevertheless, I’m pleasure I can take part in this race because it teaches me how I can confront and prepare the next time. Therefore, it is the most important an experience in my life. hope you can give me some advices after you saw it. :)

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Practicing a Narration writing 2

Type: narration
Title: an experience that taught you a lesson
There is a popular activity about called chair racing. It is from Japan. This time, they organised it in Taipei and I take took part in it. It is not an easy race because some of the competitors not only custom-build a chair for themselves but also practice it for a long time before they join the race. Although I’m not good at it than like other people, I enjoy every exciting moment. However, I’m I was so nervous before the race and a competitor told me that listening to music can warm you up. But I only take took a deep breath before the race. In the end, I fall fell down and get got hurt while the race was on so I lose lost. Nevertheless, I’m pleasure pleased I can could take part in this race because it teaches taught me how I can confront and prepare the next time. Therefore, it is the most important an experience in my life.

hope you can give me some advices after you saw it. :)


The only thing to be careful about is writing in past tense. The rest is very good :)

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