A sport
Talk about a game, sport or other group activity that is played in your country. Explain why you think the activity is enjoyable.
Ping-pang is the most popular sport in my country, since it is the national ball in China. There are many people like to play ping-pang, it is suitable for all the old and young. Playing ping-pang is really beneficial for both our mental and physical health. For example, I and my co-workers often play ping-pang after work or during our lunch time, it helps us to recover from the tiredness and makes us keep a sharp mind. Thus, we can work more effectively after playing ping-pang. That is why I think the activity is enjoyable.
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A sport
Talk about a game, sport or other group activity that is played in your country. Explain why you think the activity is enjoyable.Ping-pong is the most popular sport in my country, since it is the national sport in China. There are many people who like to play ping-pong, it is suitable for both the old and young. Playing ping-pong is really beneficial for both our mental and physical health. For example, I and my co-workers and I often play ping-pong after work or during our lunch breaktime, it helps us to recover from the tiredness of the day and helps makes us keep a sharp mind. Thus, we can work more effectively after playing ping-pong. That is why I think the activity is enjoyable.
when writing about you and another person it would always be said : "other person and I"
lunch time is a little awkward to say, but I understand what you mean, lunch break is more natural
tiredness is always talking about the thing that made you tired to "tiredness of ___" or you could say: "recover from being tired" the state of tiredness
helps us keep a sharp mind is more natural than makes us keep a sharp mind
hope this helped! I understood what you were saying very well, these comments are so you sound more natural
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A sport
Talk about a game, sport or other group activity that is played in your country. Explain why you think the activity is enjoyable.Ping-pang is the most popular sport in my country, since it is the national ball in China. There are many people like to play ping-pang, it is suitable for all the old and young. Playing ping-pang is really beneficial for both our mental and physical health. For example, I and my co-workers often play ping-pang after work or during our lunch time, it helps us to recover from the tiredness and makes us keep a sharp mind. Thus, we can work more effectively after playing ping-pang. That is why I think the activity is enjoyable.
HAVE YOU MENTIONED "PING PANG" WHEN THE CORRECT WORD IS " PING PONG". YOU DONE A BEAUTIFUL TEXT. CONGRATS.
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