PLEASE CORRECT MY LETTER! #4
Dear Richard,
Thanks for the letter. It was great to hear from you again. I should have written sooner. I have been busy with my exam.
You asked me if I like hanging out with friends or I’m a stay-at-home type. Personally, I prefer spending my free time with my friends. But there are some days when I want to stay at home alone. I usually go out with my family or do nothing on the weekend. If you ask me, I’m interested in learning foregin languages, dancing, and reading psychological books.
Anyway, I’m happy that your friend’s coming this weekend! Where will he stay? How many days will he spend with you? Do you have any idea what you will do during your friend’s visit?
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PLEASE CORRECT MY LETTER! #4
Dear Richard,
Thanks for the letter. It was great to hear from you again. I should have written sooner. I have been busy with my exam.
You asked me if I like hanging out with friends or if I’m a stay-at-home type. Personally, I prefer spending my free time with my friends, but there are some days when I want to stay at home alone. I usually go out with my family or do nothing on at the weekend. If you ask me, I’m interested in learning foreigin languages, dancing, and reading psychological books.
Anyway, I’m happy that your friend’s is coming this weekend! Where will he stay? How many days will he spend with you? Do you have any idea what you will do during your friend’s visit?
Very little to change Christina. I think that I would add "about my hobbies" after "If you ask me"
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