I went to Nara park! ① Today was hot day and It's like summer day! I worry about summer this year. I think the temperature will rise. By the way, do you know Nara park or went to there? I went to Nar

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I went to Nara park! ① Today was hot day and It's like summer day! I worry about summer this year. I think the temperature will rise. By the way, do you know Nara park or went to there? I went to Nara park with my friend today. There are a lot of foreigner. Chinese, Korean, American and so on. I bought some "shika senbei"(food for deers) and gave deers it. They were ate it and so cute! Other people interested too. If you go to Nara park , you can touch deers and give deers some foods(shika senbei). Shika senbei is being sold about 150 yen. It's cheap! Come over to Nara park! Look at the picture! I gave deer food(shika senbei).

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I went to Nara Park! ①

Today was a hot day and it's like summer day! I worry about summer this year. I think the temperature will be hotter/warmer than before rise.
By the way, do you know Nara Park or have you been went to there? I went to Nara Park with my friend today. There are were a lot of foreigners; Chinese, Korean, American and so on.
I bought some "shika senbei"(food for deers) and fed it to the gave deers it. They were ate it and are so cute! Other people were interested too.
If you go to Nara Park, you can touch the deers and feed them give deers some foods(shika senbei). Shika senbei is being sold for about 150 Yen. It's cheap! Come over to Nara Park!

Look at the picture! I gave a deer food(shika senbei).

I have a photograph somewhere of me at Nara Park in 1980.

This is so cute <3 I hope some day I can visit Nara park! The only change I would make to the corrections is "deer food" rather than "food for deer" :)

In English the word deer stays the same in singular and plural. I saw a deer in the forest. (1) The group of deer ran quickly into the forest. (many)

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