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The last day of my holiday... Today is the last day of my holiday . I feel I have wasted another good chance to do something what I really want to. At the begining of the holiday,I always tell myself that I will finish anything I have promise myself. But in the end...I just push off these things until the next holiday... Luckily,I only think like this way in the last day~I still want to go out to enjoy holidays~ Yesterday I went to Jin Wan square with my roommate.We started at noon and then taken the subway to Bin Jiang road. That road was a good place for shopping,but shopping was not our target. We wanted to find a place to watch a movie called The Jungle Book.I known this film by my friends' recommendations. After watching,I felt it was a good film.I most like smalls wolves because they looks like a group of huskies~really cute~ Than we bought some snacks and sat beside the Hai river. The light wind gently brushed.In the evening, the lights on. All this made me don't want to leave any more. At last,we came back. That is my holiday.Tomorrow I will back to the study and regret wasting my holiday..... But if give me a chance to have my holiday over again,may be I would do the same thing.

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The last day of my holiday...

Today is the last day of my holiday .
I feel I have wasted another good chance to do something what I really want to.
At the begining beginning of the a holiday, I always tell myself that I will finish anything I have promised myself I will do.
But in the end...I just push put off these things until the next holiday...
Luckily, I only think like this way in on the last day~ until then, I still want to go out to enjoy the holidays~
Yesterday I went to Jin Wan square with my roommate. We started left at noon and then taken took the subway to Bin Jiang road.
That road was a good place for shopping, but shopping was not our target aim (I like your sentence structure here).
We wanted to find a place to watch a movie called The Jungle Book. I known this film by because of my friends' recommendations.
After watching, I felt it was a good film. I most liked the smalls wolves most, because they looks looked like a group of huskies~really cute~ (good description here too!)
Than Then we bought some snacks and sat beside the Hai river.
The light wind gently brushed us. In the evening, the lights went on.
All this made me don't want to leave any more feel like I didn't want to leave.
At last, we came back.
That is was my holiday. Tomorrow I will go back to the my study and regret wasting my holiday.....
But if you give me a chance to have my holiday over again, may be maybe I would do the same thing.
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Thank you!And thank you for your correction.
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Nice work Rachel. I like your descriptive language.

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