My Trip to Bali 5

I think I have to  should wrap up my travel story with this entry. I get the feeling that it's been lasting getting/going on for too long. Anyway, I was happy that my friend joined me. He and I were  was supposed to spend the two of our overlapping days together, because I had told him earlier I would spend my last day of the trip by myself before I left  forback  /returned to  Korea that night. So he had made set his own plans for himself for that day. But after five days of traveling alone, I couldn't imagine myself spending another day by myself. So I impulsively booked a boat tour for my last day. I figured, that way, at least I would get a chance to make friends on the tour. I thought that was a great decision until we became friends with a nice Korean woman in our surfing lesson. She was fun to talk to, and she said she had some friends she had met at her guest house. Funny thing about destiny: I would never have bothered to book a tour that I hadn't even planned if I knew I'd meet someone I could hang out with on my last day. Again, I was faced with a moment of choice, and I decided to stick with my original plans this time, too. And this time, it turned out that I wasn't totally wrong.

My Trip to Bali 5

I think I have to wrap up my travel story with this entry. > I think I will wrap up ..

" Have to " ="Have got to" = to show that you must do something.

"will" = ... am going to ...

I get the feeling that it's been lasting too long.>I felt that it has gone on for (way) too long.

Anyway, I was happy that my friend joined me. He and I were supposed to spend the only two of our three overlapping days together, because I had told him earlier that I would spend the third day ,which was my last day, by myself before I return to left back for Korea that night.

So , he had to set his own plans for himself for that day. But he did join me on my last day because ,after five days of traveling alone, I couldn't imagine myself spending another day by myself.

So By the way,  I impulsively booked a boat tour for my last day.

I figured, that way, at least I would get a chance to make friends on the tour.

> I figured that , by doing that , I would at least have a chance to make friends on the tour.

I thought that was a great decision when we became friends with a nice Korean woman during our surf lesson. She was fun to talk to, and she said she had some friends whom she had met at her guest house.

Funny thing about destiny: I would never have bothered to book a tour that I hadn't even planned if I knew I'd meet someone I could hang out with on my last day.

> Talking about unwelcome destiny/cruelty of destiny , I would never have bothered to book a tour  ,which I had not planned on doing before, on my last day  if I had  known that  I'd meet someone whom I could hang out with .

Again, I was faced with a moment of choice, and I decided to stick with my original plans this time, too. And this time, it turned out that it wasn't totally wrong.

My Trip to Bali 5

*** Very good, some minor tensing issues, but it didn't detract from the passage too much. Most of my corrections were word choice adjustments so that it looks more like a native writer.