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Last year this picture is quite famous because the Gucci's 2016 spring/summer collection is very stunning colourful and vintage. I know that brand changed a new designer who before worked in accessory department.
From the printed frill pussy-bow and belt, it makes me reminded the interior design of Royal Pavilion which used same method to decorated ceiling combined 2d with 3d. The colourful column flounced dresses layer by layer is very exotic.The big square glasses and hair style is a symbol of geek-chic.
As far as I'm concerned, I like they did innovation on the fabric and sticked sequins maked it glitter. The print is a new and convenient technology which provided us more colour and pattern and how to creative use that, I think they gave me an answer. From this model it made an interesting and romantic impression on me.
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Last year this picture is quite famous This picture was quite famous last year because the Gucci's 2016 spring/summer collection is very stunning colourful and vintage. I know that the brand changed to a new designer who before previously worked in the accessory department. (NOTE: You can either say '...who previously worked in the accessory department' or 'who worked in the accessory department beforehand.')From The printed frill pussy-bow and belt, it makes me reminded me of the interior design of the Royal Pavilion which used the same method to decorated the ceiling, combined combining 2d with 3d. The colourful column flounced (I don't think 'flounced' is a word!) dresses layer by layer is very exotic.The big square glasses and hair style is a symbol of geek-chic. <-- Good sentence!
As far as I'm concerned, I like their innovation in using fabric and using sequins and glitter. The print is a new and convenient technology which has provided us with more colour and patterns and the ability to use them creatively. I think they gave me an answer. From this model it made an interesting and romantic impression on me.
Overall, not too bad! Points to note:
* Be careful with your tenses. Even if something is in the past, if explaining the process of an action, you must write it as in present. E.g. 'Last week she used bread to make soup' is good. 'last week she used bread to made soup' is bad. This is bad because you've already shown that the sentence is past-tense earlier in the sentence. Look: 'Last week she used bread to make soup.'
* If talking about an object indirectly, make sure to use 'the.'
Otherwise, good effort! 加油 :)
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