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TELEVISION My favorite TV program is a TV serie called "Pretty Little Liars". I see this TV serie since three or more years ago. It has six seasons, it's very interesting and I can enjoy it. On TV, I also have internet and I can see many kinds of TV programs. I like action series such as "Castle" or "Criminal Minds". In this type of programs appear polices and deads. On the other hand, I don't like science fiction series and gossip TV programs, such as "Big Brother". This TV programs are horrible for me. I have to admit that I don't usually watch TV because there are many advertisements or because is later to watch it by the hours. Therefore, I prefer to watch them online and other day or download them of Internet without advertisements. That way, I can watch it when I want. Nowadays, watching the series in other moment is more popular, because people cannot watch the series on TV by the hours. I think, the channels should reduce the advertisements time and they would gain viewers. About children and television we should be careful. Parents switch on the television to entertain your children, but they are a lot of hours in front of the television. Children should go to play at street with their friends and they don't have to be at home with the television so much time.

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My favorite TV program is a TV series called "Pretty Little Liars". I have been watching this TV series for about three years. It has six seasons. It's very interesting and I enjoy it.
My TV has internet and so I can see many different kinds of TV programs on it. I like action series such as "Castle" or "Criminal Minds". In these types of programs, there are a lot of police and dead bodies. I don't like science fiction series and gossip TV programs as much, such as "Big Brother". To me, these TV programs are horrible. 
I have to admit that I don't usually watch the shows on TV. Either because there are a lot of advertisements or because they come on too late (Not sure what you were trying to say here). Because of this (therefore works too, but we don't use that word very often in english and it sounds kind of weird when you do), I prefer to watch them online or download them off the Internet without advertisements. That way, I can watch it whenever I want. Nowadays, watching TV shows online is more popular, because people cannot watch the show when it normally comes on. I think, if the channels reduced how many advertisements  came on, they would have more viewers.
We should be careful about children watching television. Parents switch on the television to entertain their children, but the kids spend a lot of time in front of the television. Children should go play outside with their friends and so they don't have to be at home watching the tv so much.


Buen trabajo! 

Tengo notas de algunas.

Está escribiendo muy formal. Intenta usar más palabras informal. Por ejemplo, TV es mejor que Television. No muchas personas usar la palabra Television. También, no usamos la palabra hours con frecuencia a menos que estamos hablar sobre en cuanto horas vamos a encontrarnos. 

Lo siento para mi español. Estoy intentando a aprender español y quiero a decir con usted en su idiomas. 

iBuenos suerte con aprendiendo ingles!

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