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The importance of learning new languages All of us have heard the reasons to learn languages, specifically English, if you are in business, but the reality is that learning new languages is more than get a better job, learning languages opens you new perspectives to approach life and new perspectives to see things. When you are learning a new language, you are studying also the customs and culture of the people from the language belongs. For example, every single people of the world have a sentence to say "This day is beautiful", but each one has different sounds, etymologies and even expressions to say it. For western languages whose peoples are located at different latitudes, such as Spanish, Portuguese, French and English it is very interesting because people use different phrases to say something depending on its latitude. I think also that learning an Asian language, it is very important for every single person on the west because it could help to open your mind even more by studying its etymology and alphabets, it implies to get new ideas of the world, and if you are in business and social sciences, get new ideas of the world results means more probability of success. Learning English it is important, but believe me, every single culture of the world would rather hire someone who speaks it native language than another one who doesn't

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The importance of learning new languages

All of us have heard the reasons to learn languages, specifically English, if you are(*you're* contractions are always more natural sounding) in business, but the reality is that learning new languages is more than getting a better job, learning languages opens you gives you new perspectives to approach life and new perspectives to see things. When you are learning a new language, you are also studying also the customs and culture of the people from whom/who (whom is correct but English speakers use the incorrect who so often that it seems right to them) the language belongs. For example, every single people "single" is one so it should be "person" (not plural "people") of in the world have a sentence to that says "This day is beautiful", but each one has different sounds, etymologies and even expressions to say it. For western languages, whose peoples are located at different latitudes such as; Spanish, Portuguese, French and English it is very interesting because people use different phrases to say something depending on its latitude.

I also think also that learning an Asian language, it is very important for every single person on in the west because it could help to open your mind even more by studying its etymology and alphabets, *it implies to get new ideas of the world*>> I don't understand what you're trying to say, and if you are in business and social sciences, you (can) get new ideas of the world  results which means more of a probability of success.>>which means a greater chance of success (more natural) Learning English it is important, but believe me, every single culture of in the world would rather hire someone who speaks it as a native language than another one who doesn't


Very well written! 

By the way:

1. "also" should go before verbs. You can put if afterwards but generally it sounds much better when it is before verbs. 

2. You might want to review of vs. in 

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