my first notebook,gratefully welcome correct it
today is the Labor day ,we have three day off and my roommates is eating hotpot ，which is so delicious！
but is very easy to make it .firstly ,we spoil the water and put spicy hotpot base in .after a few minutes ,we get all the food (usually fried tofu ,pork , juicy beef ball ,vegetables etc .) in .then you just wait to eat.
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My first notebook, gratefully welcome to correct it.
Today is the Labor day, we have three days off and my roommates are eating hotpot, which is so delicious!But it is very easy to make
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my first notebook,gratefully welcome correct it
today is the Labor day ,we have three day off and my roommates is eating hotpot ，which is so delicious！but it is very easy to make it .firstly ,we spoil boil the water and put spicy hotpot base in .after a few minutes ,we get all the food (usually fried tofu ,pork , juicy beef ball ,vegetables etc .) in .then you just wait to eat.
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My first notebook,gratefully you are welcome to correct it
Today is the Labor Day,we have three days off and my roommates is eating hotpot, which is so delicious！
but It's very easy to make it. Firstly, we spoil boil the water and put add a spicy hotpot base, in After a few minutes, we get add all the other ingredients food (usually fried tofu, pork, juicy beef balls, vegetables etc .) in . Then you just wait to eat it.
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A couple of easy things to do to make it look better:
1. Use capital letters at the beginning of each sentence.
2. After a comma or a full stop, put a space in.
3. Before a comma or a full stop, do not a space.
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