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Dear Clara,
how are you? I'm writing this letter for telling you about my last travel. The last week I have left home for an amazing travel in the UK. I have arrived at 6:00 PM at the London's airport and after have took the bagage I have called a taxi and I have went to the hotel. The room was very well but while I opened the window, a bird was entering in the room, a disaster!
London is fantastic, I have seen the Bing Ben, the London eye and Buckingham palace, and also I have went to the M&M's store! There was four walls covered by M&M's containers, a beautiful views!
Unfortunately I was in London two days, a very shame because just in two days I fall in love with this fantastic city!
I hope I shall come back early, in meanwhile I'm studying for the university.
And you? Did you have travelled in this period?
I look for your replay.
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Dear Clara,
How are you? I'm writing this letter for telling to tell you about my last trip travel. The Last week I have left home for an amazing trip/holiday travel in the UK. I have arrived at 6:00 pm at the London's airport and after collecting my have took the bagage, I have called a taxi and I have went to the hotel. The room was very well nice, but while when/after I opened the window, a bird was entering flew into the room, what a disaster!
London is fantastic, I saw/visited have seen the Bing Ben, the London eye and Buckingham palace, and also I have went to the M&M's store! There was are four walls covered by M&M's containers, a beautiful sight views!
Unfortunately, I was in London for only two days, a very big shame because just in two days I fell in love with this fantastic city!
I hope I shall come go back soon early, but in the meanwhile I'm studying for the at university.
And you? Have you been away recently? Did you have travelled in this period?
I look forward to hearing from you. your replay.
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Dear Clara,how are you? I'm writing this letter to you about my last trip. Last week, I left home for an amazing trip in the UK. I arrived at 6:00 PM at the London airport and after I claimed my baggage I called a taxi and went to the hotel. The room was very good but when I opened the window, a bird flew in. What a disaster!
London is fantastic. I have seen Big Ben, the London Eye and Buckingham Palace, and I also went to the M&M's store! There were four walls covered by M&M's containers, a beautiful view!
Unfortunately I was in London only two days, a shame because in just two days I fell in love with this fantastic city!
I hope I will come back soon; meanwhile, I'm studying for the university.
And you? Did you travel in this period?
I look forward to your reply.
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