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Diary Taday, I felt a bit unhappy. Before I write this diary, I think I should know something at first. Actually, I always know that in my heart. We treat someone else as a true friend with all of our kindness, it is voluntary. No one has a right to ask for a repay. I don't think I am a kind and self-giving people. Sometimes I will just think about myself. But I think it is normal, everybody will do it no just me.The premise is that I must not hurt other people. This afternoon, a friend, who really made me feel sad. I didn't think I have done something wrong to her. Compared with other friends in our life, I am not the best friend of her, at least I am a reliable people to her. However, the thing which happened today, I found she just thought about herself. She didn't care my feeling. Even though I tried to stay away from her intentional, she didn't care at all. She made me feel frustrated.

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Diary

Today, I felt a bit unhappy. Before I write this diary entry, I think I should let you know something first. It is something that I have actually always known in my heart. As a true friend, treating someone else with all of our kindness is voluntary. No one has the right to ask to be repaid. I don't think I am a kind and self-giving person. Sometimes, I will just think about myself. But I think it is normal, everybody does it, not just me. The premise, though, is that I must not hurt other people.

This afternoon, a friend really made me feel sad. I don't think I have done anything wrong to her. Compared to our other friends, I am not a best friend to her, but at least I am a reliable person to her. However, something happened today. I found out that she just thinks about herself. She doesn't care about my feelings. Even though I tried to stay away from her intentionally, she didn't care at all. She made me feel frustrated.


I'm sorry that someone made you feel sad. People can be selfish, so it is up to you to decide who you keep as friends. Try to have friends that make you happy and are supportive of you. But remember, you should also try to do the same for others :)!

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