My Grandma's Belly
This year is my grandma's the sixtieth birthday.I haven't seen her for a long time and I really miss her very much.
When I was a little infant,since that time my parents were very busy so that they haven't any time to look after me,my grandma had to take care of me.
My grandma was a chubby lady.I loved her belly best.Because when I was a little light weight girl at that time,every night before I slept,I loved to lie on her stomach and at the same time she taught me to recognize the Chinese characters.She was also an astronomy lover so she taught me the knowledge about the story of the galaxy and the vast and boundless universe every night.If I may say so,she aroused my huge interest of the literature and the astronomy.She is always as my best teacher and friend of my life when I was a little girl.
I got a lot of memories with my grandma.Now she is getting older and older and I am close to my twentieth birthday.I wish she could live in happiness and health.
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My Grandma's Belly
This year is my grandma's sixtieth birthday. I haven't seen her for a long time and I really miss her very much.When I was a little infant my parents were very busy so that they hadn't any time to look after me and my grandma had to take care of me.
My grandma was a chubby lady. I loved her belly the best. Because when I was a little girl I was light and every night before I slept, I loved to lie on her stomach and at the same time she taught me to recognize the Chinese characters. She was also an astronomy lover so she taught me the story of the galaxy and the vast and boundless universe every night. If I may say so, she aroused my huge interest of literature and astronomy. She was always my best teacher and friend when I was a little girl.
I have a lot of memories of my grandma. Now she is getting older and older and I am close to my twentieth birthday. I wish she could live in happiness and health.
Very well written!
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