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correct this It's my first time to write a notebook entry ,but I seem like don't know what to say , but I have to say something,so I have to complain about one of my friends. Here is the story, it was one month ago, my friend and i had a plan to hung out together, but when i just got there and saw her less in a minute, her boyfriend rang her a phone,and she said that her boyfriend wants to take her to somewhere interesting and she really wants to go, so she wants to reschedule our appointment.But that’s not the point ,the point is she dumped on the street and got on her boyfriend's car without any apologies.

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It's my first time to write a notebook entry ,but I seem like don't know what to say , but I have to say something,so I have to complain about one of my friends.
Here is the story, it was one month ago, my friend and i had a plan to hung out together, but when i just got there and saw her less in a minute, her boyfriend rang her a phone,and she said that her boyfriend wants to take her to somewhere interesting and she really wants to go, so she wants to reschedule our appointment.But that’s not the point ,the point is she dumped on the street and got on her boyfriend's car without any apologies.

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It's my first time writing a notebook entry ,but I feel like don't know what to say.  But I have to say something, so I will complain about one of my friends.
Here is the story. It was one month ago, my friend and I had a plan to hang out together, but less than a minute after I got there when i just got there and saw her less in a minute, her boyfriend rang her on the phone,and she said that her boyfriend wants to take her to somewhere interesting and she really wants to go, so she wants to reschedule our appointment.But that’s not the point ,the point is she dumped on the street (Not sure what you mean here- she dumped me on the street?) and got in her boyfriend's car without any apologies.

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