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Hi~ it‘s my first practice in italki There is no doubt that it is unwise to jump to conclusion upon seeing or hearing something. For example, there's always been a stereotype about successful business. Someone insist that all the successful business are selfish. So when they see a scandal about successful business from internet, they jump to conclusion that all the successful business are nasty. That is rediculous ! When we seeing or hearing something, our opinions are beginning to solidify. But be attention, maybe there's someone to manipulate public opinion. And jump to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something thickens the problems in sometimes. So we should think things out for ourselves and to be a clever person.

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Hi~ it‘s this is my first practice in italki

There is no doubt that it is unwise to jump to a conclusion upon seeing or hearing something.

For example, there's always been a stereotype about successful businesses (plural). Someone  (you can write some, or some people) insist that all the successful business are selfish, So so when they see read a scandal about a successful business from on the internet, they jump to the conclusion that all the successful business are nasty. That is rediculous ridiculous!

When we seeing or hearing something bad, our opinions are beginning  to solidify. But be pay attention, maybe there's someone to manipulate manipulating public opinion. And and jumping to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something thickens sometimes makes the problem worse in sometimes.

So we should think things out for ourselves and to be a clever person (maybe wise is a better instead of clever).
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Hi~ it‘s my first practice in italki

There is no doubt that it is unwise to jump to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something.

For example, there's always been a stereotype about successful businesses. Someone insists that all the successful businesses are selfish. So when they see a scandal about a successful business on the internet, they jump to the conclusion that all the successful businesses are nasty. That is ridiculous !

When we see or hear something, our opinions begin to solidify. But be attentive; maybe there's someone who manipulates public opinion. And to jump to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something thickens the problems sometimes.

So we should think things out for ourselves and be a clever person.

Very well written!

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