Is this correct ? Last thursday we had a great experience at university, we had the opportunity to meet different agencies which show us how easy it is to travel, in order to improve our English and F

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Is this correct ? Last thursday we had a great experience at university, we had the opportunity to meet different agencies which show us how easy it is to travel, in order to improve our English and French skills, for me the most interesting agency was Home World, because It seems trustworthy. It caught my attention, since right now they have a special offer, if you travel this year with them, you will pay $ 7.500.000 COP. As we study foreign languages it is interesting to see all the opportunities we have, if I had the chance to travel to another country, it would be to Australia for at least six months with Home World Agency, due to it is the best option for me. In my case if I were studying in Australia, I would have to work, because housing and food are not free, and in that country you have the possibility to work to continue studying. Furthermore, if I were there, I would visit many places. Actually this agency is not expensive and it offers many ways to pay, If I had the money right now, I would travel immediately but I guess that if I save money, it will be possible to do in two years.

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Last Thursday we had a great experience at university. We had the opportunity to meet different agencies which showed us how easy it is to travel, in order to improve our English and French skills. For me the most interesting agency was 'Home World', because It seemed trustworthy. It caught my attention, since right now they have a special offer, if you travel this year with them, you will pay $ 7.500.000 COP. As we study foreign languages it is interesting to see all the opportunities we have. If I had the chance to travel to another country it would be to Australia for at least six months with Home World Agency due to it being the best option for me. In my case if I were studying in Australia, I would have to work, because housing and food are not free, and in that country you can work to continue your studies. Furthermore, if I were there, I would visit many places. Actually this agency is not expensive and it offers many ways to pay, If I had the money right now, I would travel immediately but I guess that if I save some money, it will be possible to go in two years.

Very well written!

Great work with this paragraph! It is great to see that you are experimenting with commas. They are super important. I think you'll be happy to know that you used them well, but you didn't have to use so many. There were a few other issues here and there, but they were minimal and did not confuse the meaning of your paragraph. I hope my corrections help. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask! I hope to teach and travel in order to work on my Spanish and Chinese. Best wishes on your world adventures!

Is this correct ?

Last Thursday, we had a great experience at the university. We had the opportunity to meet different agencies which showed us how easy it is to travel in order to improve our English and French skills. For me, the most interesting agency was Home World because It seems trustworthy. It caught my attention since, right now, they have a special offer; If you travel this year with them, you will only pay $ 7,500.000 COP.

As we study foreign languages, it is interesting to see all the opportunities we have. If I had the chance to travel to another country, I would go to Australia, for at least six months, with Home World Agency because it is the best option for me. In my case, if I were studying in Australia, I would have to work because housing and food are not free, and in that country you have the possibility to work to continue studying. Furthermore, if I were there, I would visit many places. This agency is not expensive and it offers many ways to pay. If I had the money right now, I would travel immediately but I guess that if I save money, it will be possible to do in two years.

I hope you will travel everywhere you want. I like traveling. Actually I enjoy to learn more about this world. In fact, it gives me sense of freedom.

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