PLEASE CORRECT MY ESSAY!

Our modern world is developing every time. Also culture and art are changing too. Some people adore reading books. Others prefer watching its the film versoins. What is better?(Which is better?)
Personally, I agree with people who think that books is are better than its the film versions. Have you ever considered why parents start reading books to their infants in their childhood? Firstly, reading develops us and our fantasies, teaches us to think and to give form our view(opinion). Secondly, reading advances our memory and concentration. People who read remember some information more quickly, and find it easier to concentrate to something important easier.
On the other hand, watching films is better for people who cannot image(people with a lack of imagination).You(They) can just sit and enjoy a movie because there are actors, decorations(scenery), etc there. Moreover, when you watch films you can do different things at the same time: play with a child, listen to your partner, clean, wash up, etc. [If you are at home!]
I cannot agree with people who think that films are better than books. Watching movies can make people lazy and prevent from developing a fantasy. There is the most important reason - films are not so interesting because every producer can change some nessecary necessary moments of an original story. [It is necessary because the film has to be much shorter than the time to read the book!]
To sum up, I would say that reading books are really more interesting and more exciting than watching its the film versions. When you read a story, you plunge into it and can get new feeleings, bright colours, and unique senses. [You can also stop and restart reading easily]

A nice essay Christina! Any questions, just ask!