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MOBILE PHONES (First part) First of all, I consider that mobile phones have been a great advance for the society in terms of personal and professional as it has improved so much the speed and way of communication among people, especially since Internet appeared in our lives and smartphones were created which not only provides us a tool to call for someone, but also a smaller gadget that substitute the computer and give us access to a bunch of information with only one click. However, it also some disadvantages as for example: - It has been a detriment for conversations as people with you deserve more attention than those at the end of a phone. At least, if you have to keep your phone on and you’re expecting an important call or message, apologize in advance because but it’s a lack of respect. - Talking and sending messages by phone while you’re driving is really dangerous for you, people who are in the car, other drivers who are around you and of course for pedestrian. Definitely, they are a distraction even though the existing of the hands-free. As far as my experience with mobile phones is concerned, it’s been ordinary although I have an anecdote related to them. To start, I lost my first mobile just like that and it only lasted me one week. I was playing football and I had left it next to the goal, when the match finished I forgot to pick it up. The following day I realized while I was fishing. Right away, I came back to the pitch to get it back but unfortunately it wasn’t there. It is noticed that I didn’t use to have a mobile so that from that time on I’m always careful. Now I’ve got a smartphone as everybody, I’ve had it since December. I was given as Christmas present by my parents who took advantage of a discount on “Black Friday’s day”. To be honest, I’m very pleased with it because it’s a lot faster than my last mobile. Probably in 4 years, I’ll change it whether it’ll brake or it won’t work properly. Anyway, so far so good.

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MOBILE PHONES (First part)

First of all, I consider that mobile phones to be have been a great advance for the society, in both terms of personal and professional terms, as they have it has greatly improved so much the speed and way manner of communication among people. especially Since the internet has appeared in our lives and smartphones were created which they not only provides us a tool to call for someone, but also a smaller gadget that substitutes for the computer and gives us access to a bunch of information with only one click. However, they it also have some disadvantages as for example:
- It has been a detrimental for conversations. The people with you deserve more attention than those at the end of a phone. At least, if you have to keep your phone on and you’re expecting an important call or message, apologize in advance because but it’s a lack of respect.
- Talking and sending messages by phone while you’re driving is really dangerous for you, the other people who are in the car, other drivers who are around you and of course for pedestrian. Definitely, they are a distraction despite the existence of even though the existing of the hands-free calling.
As far as my experience with mobile phones is concerned, it’s been ordinary although I have an anecdote related to them. To start, I lost my first mobile just like that and it only lasted me one week. I was playing football and I had left it next to the goal, when the match finished I forgot to pick it up. The following day I realized it was missing while I was fishing. Right away, I came back to the pitch to get it back but unfortunately it wasn’t there. It is noticed I should note (or, point out= that I wasn't didn’t used to having a mobile but so that from that time on I’m always careful. Now I’ve got a smartphone as does everybody else, I’ve had it since December. I was given it as a Christmas present by my parents who took advantage of a discount on “Black Friday’s day”. To be honest, I’m very pleased with it because it’s a lot faster than my last mobile. Probably in 4 years, I’ll change it whether or not it is broken  it’ll brake or doesn't it won’t work properly. Anyway, so far so good.

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