Was it snow?
I can't believe that it is Spring and I saw snowing in London yesterday!
I thought my home town in Brazil had a crazy weather because it varies dramatically during the day, but my opinion on this is totally changing now that I came to London. And it is not just because I think I saw snow in the Spring, but everyday the weather starts in a way and it ends in another. It is also very common to have variation in between.
Today, for instance, it was a sunny morning and suddenly it became cloudy and chilly. It has a chance to rain and probably it will get colder then.
I prefer warm weather than cold, and what I dislike most of the London cold days is the wind, it freezes even the brain.
I really hope that it gets warmer soon to enjoy the parks and all beautiful green areas London has to offer.
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Was it snow?
I can't believe that it is Spring and I saw it snowing* in London yesterday!I thought my home town in Brazil had some crazy weather because it varies dramatically during the day, but my opinion of this is totally changing now that I came to London. And it is not just because I think I saw snow in the Spring, but everyday the weather starts in one way and ends in another. It is also very common to have some variation in between.
Today, for instance, it was a sunny morning and suddenly it became cloudy and chilly. It has a chance to rain and probably it will get colder then.
I prefer warm weather than cold, and what I dislike most of the cold days in London is the wind, it freezes even the brain.
I really hope that it gets warmer soon to enjoy the parks and all beautiful green areas London has to offer.
*or, I saw it snow in London yesterday. (I didn't).
Very well written!
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Was it snowing in London?
I can't believe that it is Spring and I saw snow in London yesterday!I thought my home town in Brazil had a crazy weather, because it varies drastically during the day. Since I came to London my opinion on this is totally changing. It is not just because I think I saw snow in the Spring, but everyday the weather starts in one way and it ends in another. It is also very common to have variation in between.
Today, for instance, it was a sunny morning and suddenly it became cloudy and chilly. It might rain and it will probably become colder then.
I prefer warm weather to cold weather, and what I dislike most about cold days in London is the wind, it even freezes your brain.
I really hope that it gets warmer soon, so we can enjoy the parks and all the beautiful green areas London has to offer
This entry was pleasant to read, good job! Just be careful with the syntax of your sentences.
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