April, 27th

1. It bores me to tears. being at home is really dull. (Put "it" after you tell what "it" is.)

2.They broke the mold when they mad at you. (What does this mean?)

5. being dragged off to prison. this is not a sentence.

6. Off the top of my head, I expect she's not going to get that job. (This sentence is not natural. "Off the top of my head" is usually used when you are estimating or guessing)

7. we may have lost this battle, but nonetheless we will continue and win the war.

8.Doubt no one would have handed them in either. (If you are using "either" you need a comparison.  "I doubt anyone ELSE would have handed them in either" Also, doubt is a negative, so "doubt no one" = "think someone".  So your original sentence is saying "I think someone else would have handed them in."

April, 27th

1. It bores me to tears. Being at home is really dull.

2.They broke the mould when they made you

4. That's very touching to hear.

5. Being dragged off to prison.

6. Off the top of my head, she's not going to get that job.

7. We may have lost this bottle, but nonetheless, we will continue and win the war.

8. I doubt anyone would have handed them in either.