One summer's day
I spent the summer in Ilo, a city located on the coast, the extreme south of Peru, I am from there but for study I travelled to another city (Arequipa).Getting home is great because I can eat delicious food my mom cooks, I can annoy my brothers, I can talk my father and especially I can see Sasha, my pet, she is a Neapolitan mastiff and she loves to sleep. I woke up early to go the bakery for bread for breakfast and on the way I can feel sea breeze and I can see sea. After breakfast I went out with Sasha to walk for over an hour, we walked for the seafront enjoying the landscape and the good time, after a long walk we rested near to the beach and I listened songs of Andrés Calamaro. When I came back it was launch hour. Later I rest an hour and I was looking for a good place to read, quiet to read a book and there I was for two hours reading, later I wen to a ice cream and I came back home. I was helping my mom with dinner and later I was going out with my friends to enjoy the night.
The picture is of ILo
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One summer's day
I spent the summer in Ilo, a city located on the coast. The extreme south of Peru, I am from there but I travelled to another city for my studies (Arequipa).Going home is great because I can eat delicious food my mom cooks, I can annoy my brothers, I can talk with my father and especially I can see Sasha, my pet, she is a Neapolitan mastiff and she loves to sleep. I woke up early to go the bakery for bread for breakfast and on the way I can feel the sea breeze and I can see the sea. After breakfast I went out with Sasha for a walk for over an hour, we walked to the seafront enjoying the landscape and having a good time, after a long walk we rested near the beach and I listened to songs of Andrés Calamaro. When I came back it was launch (Lunch hour??) hour. Later I rested for an hour, and I looked for a good place to read; quiet so I could read a book. There I was for two hours reading. later I went for an Ice cream and I came back home. I was helping my mom with dinner and later I was going out with my friends to enjoy the night.The picture is of ILo
Great job!! i made some corrects but your english is very good!
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