A few sentences. What are the mistakes?
In the book that I'm currently reading. Nicolas, is the main character. He's an officer in charge of an important invetigation in the eighteenth century. The investigation that he leads is important because it's linked to another mystery concerning a few personal papers of the king.
To lead this investigation, Nicolas has a lot of rights and has a lot of money for paying a lot of indicators in Paris. He leads this investigation with a colleague who has much more experience than Nicolas.
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A few sentences. What are the mistakes?
In the book that I'm currently reading. Nicolas, is the main character. He's an officer in charge of an important investigation in the eighteenth century. The investigation that he leads is important because it's linked to another mystery concerning a few personal papers of the king.To lead this investigation, Nicolas has a lot of rights and has a lot of money for paying a lot of indicators in Paris. He leads this investigation with a colleague who has much more experience than Nicolas.
No mistake in here accept the one spelling error in the word investigation. I crossed out the line in the second paragraph as you want to avoid the use of the same words in one sentence. You can say there is a lot of something, then begin to list those items. It`s better to say, he has a lot of rights and money because you already use the word ``a lot`` later in the sentence.
I hope this helps :)
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