PLEASE CORRECT MY LETTER! Dear Tom, Thanks for the letter. It was great to hear from you again. I should have written sooner. I have been busy with my exam. You asked me what sport there is in my

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PLEASE CORRECT MY LETTER! Dear Tom, Thanks for the letter. It was great to hear from you again. I should have written sooner. I have been busy with my exam. You asked me what sport there is in my school. Unfortunately, we have football and bascetball only. In my opinion, people usually go to watch big sporting events in some sport bars or stay at home with friends. Personally, my favourite sport is dancing. Ifell relax, happiness, and energy when I do it. Anyway, I am very happy that your dad’s bough a new car. What colour is it? How much is the car? Where did he bought it? Sorry, I have to go now. I need to prepare for my exam again. I hope to get your letter soon. Best wishes, Christina

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PLEASE CORRECT MY LETTER!

Dear Tom,
Thanks for the letter. It was great to hear from you again. I should have written sooner. I have been busy with my exam.
You asked me what sport there is in at my school. Unfortunately, we only have football and basketball. In my opinion, people usually go to watch big sporting events in some sport bars or stay at home with friends. Personally, my favourite sport is dancing. It feels relaxing, joyful, and energizing when I do it.
Anyways, I am very happy that your dad bought a new car. What colour is it? How much is the car? Where did he buy it?
Sorry, I have to go now. I need to prepare for my exam again. I hope to get your letter soon.
Best wishes,
Christina

PLEASE CORRECT MY LETTER!

Dear Tom,
Thanks for the letter, it was great to hear from you again. I should have written sooner but I have been busy with my exams.
You asked me what sports there are at my school. Unfortunately, we only have football and basketball. In my opinion, people usually go to watch big sporting events in sport bars or stay at home and watch with friends. Personally, my favourite sport is dancing. I feel relaxed, happy, and full of energy when I dance.
Anyway, I am very happy that your dad has bought a new car. What colour is it? How much was the car? Where did he buy it?
Sorry, I have to go now. I need to prepare again for another exam.

I hope you write soon.

Best wishes,
Christina

PLEASE CORRECT MY LETTER!

Dear Tom,
Thanks for the letter. It was great to hear from you again. I should have written sooner but I have been busy with my exam.
You asked me what sport there is in my school. Unfortunately, we only have football and basketball. In my opinion, people usually go to watch big sporting events in a sports bars or stay at home with friends. Personally, my favourite sport is dancing. I Fell relaxed, happy, and energised when I do it.
Anyway, I am very happy that your dad’s bought a new car. What colour is it? How much was the car? Where did he buy it?
Sorry, I have to go now. I need to prepare for my exam again. I look forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Christina

PLEASE CORRECT MY LETTER!

Dear Tom,
Thanks for the letter. It was great to hear from you again. I should have written sooner. I have been busy with my exam.
You asked me what sport there is in my school. Unfortunately, we have football and bascetball only. In my opinion, people usually go to watch big sporting events in some sport bars or stay at home with friends. Personally, my favourite sport is dancing. Ifell relax, happiness, and energy when I do it.
Anyway, I am very happy that your dad’s bough a new car. What colour is it? How much is the car? Where did he bought it?
Sorry, I have to go now. I need to prepare for my exam again. I hope to get your letter soon.
Best wishes,
Christina

Dear Tom

Thanks for the letter, it was lovely to hear from you again. I should have written sooner, but I have been busy with my exams.

You asked me what sports there were in my school: unfortunately, we only have football and basketball. Most people either watch big sporting events in sports bars or stay at home with friends. My favourite sport is dancing, although it is more of a hobby than a sport. I am happy, energised - and I relax when I dance.

I am pleased to hear that your dad's bought a new car. What colour is it? How much did it cost? Where did he buy it?

I am sorry, but I have to go now because I need to prepare for my exam once more. I look forward to receiving your next letter soon.

Best wishes

Christina.

PLEASE CORRECT MY LETTER!

Dear Tom,
Thanks for the letter. It was great to hear from you again.(Thanks for the letter, it was great to hear from you again.) I should have written sooner. I have been busy with my exam. (I should have written sooner, but I have been busy with my exam.)
You asked me what sports there is are in my school. Unfortunately, we only have football and basketball only. In my opinion, people usually go to watch big sporting events in some sport bars or stay at home with friends. Personally, my favourite sport is dancing. I feel relaxed, happiness happy, and energy energised when I do it. (It makes me feel relaxed, happy and energised.)
Anyway, I am very happy that your dad’s bought a new car. What colour is it? How much is was the car? Where did he bought buy it?
Sorry, I have to go now. I need to prepare for my exam again. I hope to get your next letter soon.
Best wishes,
Christina

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