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Krystal... I do not have a lot of spare (free) time, but I will try to help you a little.
should Should children be allowed to play computer games?
Computer game is not a fresh new word to most of us.
Since the techniques devleop technology has developed, computer games are designed to be more attractive and fasinating fascinating.
There are always tremendous controversial agruments arguments about whether children should spend time on playing computer games.
Most of parents [most people/most workers/most employees/most students, etc] hold the opinion that children paying too much attention on to computer games could result in bad effects on their life and study.
However, in my opinion, children need to play computer games because they have a positive impact on children.
Krystal... I'll continue the corrections tomorrow.
If you use MicroSoft Word, it will put a red line under the words that are spelled incorrectly.
Here's a good website that explains English articles (a/an/the/and when we don't use an article):
http://www.englishpage.com/articles/index.htm
Sometimes we don't use an article if the noun is plural. Look at "Articles Exercise 13 and Advanced Articles (Uses 15 - 16)"
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