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The reason why I study English Many things were happened for last two months. This year, I applied four graduate schools in U.S. and Singapore for August 2016 entry. I received the rejection mails from three of them before the end of March. However, the other school didn't inform me any further notice by the middle of April. There clearly seemed to be a problem or confusion in my application because I should have received the notice from the school before April 21. I called the admission office with great concern. To be specific, I was worried about my language proficiency. I just talked to the others in practical life, so it was hard to explain my current situation and problems with a limited vocabulary and simple sentences. Anyway, I called the office and sent the additional e-mail for further understanding after I hung up the phone. As a result, I received the rejection mail and they apologized their mistake. This is very tiny part of the graduate school admission process. I can learned a lot of invaluable things through my experience. Among them, I think I need to improve my English proficiency. I'm inadequate to write what I think and speak what I wanted in English professionally. Therefore, I will continue to study English for my next opportunities! Thank you for your help.

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The Reason Why I Study English

Many things have happened during the last two months.
This year, I applied for* graduate schools in U.S. and Singapore for August 2016 entry. I received rejection mails from three of them before the end of March. However, the other school didn't inform me any further by the middle of April.

There clearly seemed to be a problem or confusion in my application because I should have received the notice from this last school before April 21. I called the admission office with great concern. To be specific, I was worried about my language proficiency. I had experience of talking to others in everyday life, so it was hard to explain my current situation and problems with this limited vocabulary and simple sentences. Anyway, I called the office and sent an additional e-mail for clarification after I hung up the phone. As a result, I received the rejection mail and they apologized for their mistake.

This is very tiny part of the graduate school admission process. I can learned a lot of invaluable things through my experience. Among them, I think I need to improve my English proficiency. I cannot write what I think and say what I wanted in a better English. Therefore, I will continue to study English for my next opportunities!

Thank you for your help.

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Very well written! I think you are a little modest. Your English mistakes were small.

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Thank you Krystal. Good luck to you!
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I'm also preparing for the 2017 entry graduate school, and I can understand you. Cheer up! Wish to see you in USA.

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