When you can, but you don't want
My last notebook entry was in march, i must write more, i want to learn english. In this moment, i dont do anything, i dont work, i dont study in the university, all the time i am thinking what am i going to do? if you read this (how read this), maybe you think that i have to be responsible and i know! if i want just do it, i think that when you don't have responsibilitys, it's easy to lose the way, losing the time watching tv or facebook (I want to know how can you name me; a nickname). I need to change that, it's like to reprimand to myself. Well, at the end i want to learn english, so to write about me, i'll have some corrections and some scoldings.
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When you can, but you don't want to
My last notebook entry was in March. I must write more, because I want to learn English. At this moment, I don't do anything, I don't work, I don't study at the university, all the time I am thinking, "what am i going to do?" If you read this (how read this)--not sure what this means! sorry!, maybe you think that I have to be responsible and i know! If I want just want to do it, I think that when you don't have responsibilities, it's easy to lose the(/your) way, losing the time watching TV or surfing(/checking) facebook (I want to know how to refer to this a nickname). I need to change that, it's like I want to reprimand to myself. Well, at the end of the day I want to learn English, so to write about me, i'll have some corrections and some scoldings.(/so I wrote about myself in order to get some corrections & some scoldings).HEY!!! Great job, & great job picking up practicing English again!
TWO of the main things I corrected:
- CAPITALIZATION: "I" is always capitalized. Months & Days are always capitalized. So are languages -- English, Spanish, German, French, etc!
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