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PLEASE CORRECT MY LETTER! Dear Mary, Thanks for the letter. It was great to hear from you again. I should have written sooner. I have been busy with my exam. You ask me about if I do anything to stay healthy. Personally, I eat healthy food and dance that helps me to keep in shape. In my opinion, daily sport, a balanced diet and smile make people healthy and strong. Healthy lifestyle is becoming very popular among all people now. I like it because it makes out life better, happier and longer. Anyway, I am happy that you are going to spend your holydays at the seaside! What town will you stay in? Will you go alone? Do you have any ideas how you will spend free time there? Sorry, I have to go now. I need to prepare for my exam again. I hope to get your letter soon. Best wishes, Chrsitina

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PLEASE CORRECT MY LETTER!

Dear Mary,
Thanks for the letter. It was great to hear from you again. I should have written sooner. I have been busy with my exam.
You asked me about if I do anything to stay healthy. Personally, I eat healthy food and dance that  which helps me to keep in shape. In my opinion, daily exercise sport, a balanced diet and smile smiling make people healthy and strong. Living a healthy lifestyle is becoming very popular among all people now. I like it because it makes out life better, happier and longer.
Anyway, I am happy that you are going to spend your holydays holidays at the beach seaside! What town will you stay in? Will you go alone? Do you have any ideas of how you will spend your free time there?
Sorry, I have to go now. I need to prepare for my exam again. I hope to get your letter soon.
Best wishes,
Chrsitina  Christina
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PLEASE CORRECT MY LETTER!

Dear Mary,
Thanks for the letter. It was great to hear from you again. I should have written sooner. I have been busy with my exams.
You asked me about if I do anything to stay healthy. Personally, I eat healthy food and dance, as it helps me that helps me to keep in shape. In my opinion, exercising daily, daily sport, maintaining a balanced diet and smiling makes people healthy and strong. Having a healthy lifestyle is becoming very popular among all people now. I like it because it makes out our life better, happier and longer.
Anyway, I am happy that you are going to spend your holydays holidays at the seaside! What town will you stay in? Will you go alone? Do you have any ideas how you will spend your free time there?
Sorry, I have to go now. I need to prepare for my exams again. I hope to get your letter soon.
Best wishes,
Chrsitina

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You must have been in a hurry... There is a 'typo' in your own name! )))

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