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Living in the dormitory Living in the dormitory was one of the best experiences of college so far. But there are many troubles of living in the dorm. We had to do everything ourselves and solve our problems with other. Some trouble that we have in dorm include dirty and voice of roommates, lock of place, old furniture and equipment failure. Also we learn a bad and good experience. It’s an experience to meet new people in your dorm and your floor. That People have different behavior and different culture. One of problem that there are among roommates is noise and study’s hours and sleep’s hours for example some of them go to bed early and other roommate want to wake all night. Another problem is cleanliness, some of them don’t do duty correctly and make quarrel among them. In Jahrom, building of many dorm and furniture such cooler and fireplace, these are old and these are not new. In summer, sometimes we had to bear hot weather. Also we have a small and old refrigerator to twelve, this reason that our foods are decay and we always have lack place. please tell my mistake.

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Living in the Dormitory

Living in the dormitory was one of the best experiences of college so far. But there are many troubles of living in the dorm. We had to do everything ourselves and solve any problems amongst ourselves. Some troubles that we have in dorm include dirt and noisy roommates, lack of space, old furniture and equipment failure. We have bad and good experiences.
It’s an experience to meet new people in your dorm and your floor. Those people have a different behavior and culture. One of problems that there are among roommates is noise and differing study hours and sleeping hours, eg. some of them go to bed early and others want to stay awake all night. Another problem is cleanliness, some of them don’t do their duty correctly and this causes quarrels.
In Jahrom, housing many dorms and furniture such as the cooler and fireplace, these are old. In summer, sometimes we had to bear hot weather. Also we have a small and old refrigerator for twelve people and this means that our food decays and we always have little room for it.
please tell my mistakes.

Very well written!

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(continue of passage upper) One of big problem to many freshmen protest to rent dormitory and said: “it’s expensive for this equipment and situation”. They always compare rent of our dorm with other dorm in other city. Also we pay attention to increase annual’s rent, it’s very bad Well, living in a dormitory can be one of the greatest experiences. It’s a great way to meet new people and get involved. So, don’t give up a living in a dorm. But pay attention that it have a bad times and problems also that we had to bear them and try to solve by effort please say me my mistake

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